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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No Rina or Eile sex I'm shock other than good update
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good job just like you do every time
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my, my, my, you have outdone yourself
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I disagree with DRC, I can see what he is saying but I don't think you are just throwing them together I think its is easy to see that you are plaining on going back to the island nations by the way you made them leave in the 1st. place plus it was a tie in from the 1st chapter. I believe some just have a grunge against 4 because it's not as good as the other games. I don't think he is just picking paths up and dropping them maybe there is a few things like the Rina scene that are left out but he said he might add that Ithink he only didn't because he was trying to get the update out faster. Plus I think he is done with Suikoden 2 I don't think he left anything undone as he is taking Oulan and Ithan with Viki and the Prince so that part of the plot is still going as for the other members of The Followers of the Proven Way I think they were just added as a way to bring in Ithan and the Targetlady so their part is finish. Also I don't think the time traval is just way to make more chapters alot of us I have been asking for it plus We don't know what the plan is for down the road. the Time travel may play a big part in the overall story you can't judge it till they are back in the Suiko 5 era plus it give Viki more of a role in the story plus sheds some light on what she is hideing. I'm not trying to put down DRC opinions I just thought give another one
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a long one I'm almost to tired to write a review But I'll try to write a small one now and maybe a longer one later. The bar scene was very lively and full of action. I got a laugh out of Victor dancing on the bar. as always Jeane played a nice part. I would have liked to seen a little more of the sex atleast somthing with Rina or Valeria but I understand why it was left out as the chapter was already huge and had to be a task to write. I did like that Kasumi made it in and that was very funny and I like how the Prince is the only one that can control Oulan. I like that you keep adding new characters as it make the world fill more alive I also love that Viki was awake during the sex. The fight scene with the dark bunnies was nice I also like that Runes are frown on by some and I can't wait to see what the target ladyand ithan add to the table. I was Shock that they end up suiko 1 during a battle no least. I was hoping for a trip to Suiko 1 but never saw that coming, man that awesome
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice update it had alot going on and even but more of a plot to the time travel aspect. however I believe theirs something wrong with the battle at the end of the chapter wasn't Shasarazade a Naval battle and not a ground one. Other than that great chapter and I love the name of the chapter.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just when I was hoping for some Rina. I hope you'll add a scene with her. The update was well done. Jeane sure knows how to get a party going. It was cool that the Prince has so strong of feelings for Oulan. As always Viki was great. The fight/battle at the end was cool way to end the chapter
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I had been hoping for a big battle and you finally gave us one Thank you. I also want to see whats the story with the target lady
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey since the gang is in the Suikoden 1 era I would like to see what would happen if the Prince met a young Kasumi since he has already seen her and the Suiko 2 era Also how about having him actually meet one of the Tenkai stars.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is cute.