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for Suikoden V - Alpha Prince

by Fire37

person franz
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story so far!Can we have some lactation in kisara's case and make her choose roy or prince or something along those lines.Maybe even introduce toma or the beavers to her XD
person McDohl
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I think I would like to see Roy fool Chisto into doing somthing with him also It would be funny to see him try to get with somone the Prince has already been with and them being able to tell that it's not the Prince. Just for Laughs how about Roy dressing up like the Prince and have him make Faylen dress up like Lyon lets face it that's as close to doing Lyon that he'll ever get.

Also could you work in a Luserina scene sometime even if it's just her haveing a flashback of her 1.st time with Prince. I know it may be hard to work in but I really would love to see get some time in the story plus you noted that she was on of the 1st people the Prince hook up with after getting the Dawn Rune I think it could make for a great scene.

Anyway I'm looking forward to the next chapter and can't wait to see roy do he's thang. Keep up the great work
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! a Update coming soon, I,ve been waiting for one
person napebaf
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, very nice so far. One little thing I'd recommend though: Don't skip over so many of the sex scenes. There was a lot of build up in the bar, but no real "climax" to it, so to speak.
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey don't be sorry it's not your fault
person anonymous
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i want a continuation please,great stories..heck you really make the prince one hell of a prince,good work..
person McDohl
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man that sucks I'm really looking forward to it but You can't help your labtop going out. So just post the update when ever you can no rush.
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
They also made boats out ice for the battle
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know that at Shasarazade Tir face off with his dad's lover Sonya also if I'm not mistaken he also save her from dieing in the fire. Also the Liberation army used boats made out of ice from dragon breath. 500 boats I think. And Mathiu was gravely injured by Sanchez betrayal when Sanchez stab him and then Sanchez lit the fire. Also Shasarazade is call the floating Foortress but it is located on a small peninsula and not really afloat. so the battle could take place on fontsby land and on the lake also Tir had a small force inside the base
person Streti
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The battle of Shasarazade, what can I remember? At least, they needed a huge amount of boats to get there, and that is the reason why the Empire thought the fortress would be impregnable, because that amount of boats was so hard to get. But like Anon mentioned, the once again ingenious Mathiu had the boats made of ice with the dragons' breath. I don't remember any land battle after the naval battle, although I'm not completely certain about that. After the Liberation army has landed on the small patch of land before the fortress, boats huddled together all around, Tir and company infiltrate the fortress to release the floodgates or something like that, get confronted by Sonya Shulen and take her as captive, and barely escape when Sanchez knocks out Mathiu and sets the oil released into the fortress on fire before Tir and co have escaped, as Anon said. It's been several years of my last playthrough of Suikoden I. Maybe Suikosource could tell more?