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I continue love the this story. Chapter 3 was really good. Especially for a first attempt at a lot of sex description. I really love your concept of the runes effecting emotions. I also love the personality of all the characters they feel real and true to the game. I love that the story has some humor. There was some small errors in chapter 3 mostly typing errors in some paces there seem to be words missing but it was still easy to read. I would love see a flashback that would go more into detail about the sexual relationship between Faroush and Sialeeds. I would also love to see Faroush/Bernadette and something Lym might be ok she always seem to like her big bro more than just a brother. Also Faroush/Lun or heck maybe even Faroush/Lun/Kisara. I’m also excited to see what happens after the events of chapter3. Keep up the good work.

Great story! I loved how you opened it with sex to set the theme, and then continued with a good story. The orgy in chapter 3 was very nicely done as well. I would like to see the Prince and Sialeeds refrence that you made, also more from Lucretia. You gave her an interesting sub-personality style that I would like to see more of.

Not bad. Arshtat was a bit OOC calling Ferid a "dirty commoner" like that, but if it's just the Sun Rune acting up, I can believe that. With a good spellcheck you could probably catch the typos yourself, but it's fun to read and those are some great scenes with Miakis and Lyon satisfying the Prince. Count me in as another who liked the plot twist about all Runes affecting emotions in some way (Prince hitting the wall out of rage = Rage Rune, for one). Since it seems like Prince/Sialeeds is a winner, I guess that's what you'll run with next. However, if you feel the need to finally give Jeane some action (haven't read a story with her in it yet, which shocks me), I will not be disappointed. In fact, you write in Jeane at some point and I'll write whatever Suikoden lemon you want.

Keep it up!

ZOMG! Please make moar! I cant stop fapping.. lol

Liek to see Faroush/Luserina, Faroush/Lymsleia, Faroush/Miakis, Faroush/Bernadette, Faroush/Cathari (oohh..sage)

Its teh Harem! Keep it up. Rooting fer ya.

I continue like the fact that even though The Prince is a sex fiend, sex isn't the only thing he thinks about , He actually cares for those around him. I also love the fact that he really does Love Lyon and doesn't just use her as a concubine. Another Great chapter keep them coming

Wow. A great opening there, getting right to business. A sexy blowjob wakeup with a nice flashback to Syaleeds. The Prince in your story is quite different from mine, but it works very well. I had an inkling I might like this story by the title alone, and the first chapter sets a great premise indeed. Hope you continue! Enjoyed the references to Suikoden IV and was also a little surprised to see you make a reference to my story :)

The Kisara scene was hot as well, although her getting "very wet" - isn't it a bit too soon for that? The peeing scene was funny, although I worried for a second that there would be some watersports, ew. The language was good as well. I spotted only one typo, Jeane without the e, and I almost made a similar one just now. The plot element with the Dawn rune was explained well, and it's a nice idea, too. Thanks for the reviews, and I'll be looking forward to see more of your story!

I love it so far. I like your take on the Prince & Lyon's relationship. I also like the references to Suikoden 4. The Dawn rune aspect is a great idea. I like idea that Sialeeds & The Prince had some type of sexual relationship, But I wish we could had seen how it started. also would love to seen the scene between The Prince & Luserina.I like the fact that your Prince is so confident of himself .I think you have some great plot elements to work with. I'll be looking forward to seeing more of your story. I just have a small request since you are already work with Kisara I would love see the Prince go after Lun or vice versa. Keep it coming.

Thank you for the reviews, I truly appreciate it. Inspired me to write another chapter.