rate_review Reviews

Love the story everytime I'm on here the 1st thing I do is check if you have add an update can't wait to see more.

Chapter 14 was one of the hottest things I have ever read. Very well written although there seem to be a few errors such as words being left out but you could tell what you ment to be there also not that it's a big deal it but at one point Arshtat refer to Sialeeds and Haswar both being her sisters while Haswar is in fact just her cousin. Like I said no big deal it was most likly a typing mistake.

Anyway onto the good stuff the sex was grade-A stuff very well written and very descriptive. It had a very playful and hot tone to it with all the teasing going back and forth as has the whole bath scene overall. It was fun to see Lyon and The Prince working as a team it made for a good read. Also the fantasy that Arshtat had was nice. To be honest I hated to see the bath scene end, even if it was a few chapters long it was still very hot.

As always Viki is a riot and it's good to see her get some more scene time. And even though Suiko 4 is most liky my lest favorite Suiko game it's nice to see that Lazlo,Paula,Jewel,Tal and Chiepoo "atlest thats the 5 I would like to see that were on the island" will most liky make an showing in the next few chapters hopefuly you can give them more personality than they show in the game.

Oh and I can't wait to see the plot pick up also can't wait to see more Sialeeds I'm hoping she'll return to the Prince's side but thats just wishful thinking. See there's so much more I could comment on more but I'm having a brain fart at the moment.

I just want to thank you for putting so much time into writing this story and for also answering my emails you can tell that you really enjoy writing this story and that you enjoy getting feedback.Thanks again

Wow Just Wow I'm shock and amaze That was one sexy chapter

Wow 14 chapters now that's an commitment. I can't believe it. Nicely done. I was wondering if you plan to do a battle between the 2 armys somewhere down the road.

Holy Jeanetastic What a wonderful job you've done with Jeane. I always get a nice fuzzy feeling when I see her pop up

yes more Viki I'm very happy with that. Can't wait to see what else she gets herself into.

Just wanted to say I like how insane you made Yuber act. And the whole action/fight scene with him and the gang was great and very intense I think you have an nack for action scenes you should do some more later.

I Just started reading this story and only read ch 1 so far. And must say that I have a feeling that I might just stay up and read all of the chapters tonight. Love the playful nature between Lyon & Faroush they feel like a real couple. Love the Kisara stuff and how Lyon was distracting Logg and Retso so the Prince could feel up Kisara was great

Nice orgies

Hey man great smut but I can't to the plot pick back up