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Dude, I loves your fights scenes. I really wish you do a few more. I did like the Oulan scne and the way she kept looking over while he was trying to ask her some stuff. I also wanted to tell you that the island chapters were great I loves me Paula. it's also good that you have made Riou have a big tool it's shows that the Tenkai are even more special.

Love the lastest update. however I also wish you stay in the island nations longer. I was really hoping to see more of what would happen to Lazlo and if The Prince could help Lazlo and his gourp somehow. I hope that you have the Prince get sent back there again before he gets back to his own time, may be sometime after Lazlo becomes the leader of the ship. It would also be neat to see the Prince with the Jeane from that time period. I hope your able to get a new update out sometime in the next couple weeks. Also I read your new story I didn't leave a review but I did enjoy it and want read more about the main person it's nice to see a story that is about mosty original characters it helps bring more like to the suikoden world.

Oulan is perhaps my absolute favorite woman from the suikoden series
so I totally loved the 18th chapter!
However I think she surrendered to his affection a little too easily
because I was hoping and expecting her to be in charge of the events.
Also, perhaps the number of Oulan's orgasms was abit over the top though
I really hope they're not done yet...there are still many positions to cover! ;)
Please, keep writing!

Chapter 18 was just lovely. Love the way Prince try to wake Viki up. Plus I love that you made Oulan almost nympho like and told the real reason she saves women. some nice female cumming action. It was nice to see The Prince ordering Oulan around I'm sure she's the one that give the orders most of time so it was nice to see her in a diff light.Love the chap, love the story. I hope you'll keep them in the city states longer than you did the island nations "I was really hoping for a Prince/Kika scene or just for laughs a mermaid bj" Anyway thanks for taking the time to mold a great fic

Why couldn't you send them to the grasslands or something...I hate Suikoden IV...

I'm sure he'll make them go there before the whole time travel thing is over. And Suiko 4 might be the worst Suiko game but it did have good points and he did a great job with the chapters plus the Rune of punishment is one of the most intriguing runes in the game.

Other than that...yeah this is the best damn lemon in the section.

good chapter, however I would of liked to seen more of what Lyon and Linfa were doing

I must say that even though the last 3 chapters may have not move the main plot that much They were really great and gave something extra that is missing from other fics. I think you should do more with ROP and Lazlo because man you done a great job of making me want to see more.

Nice, Oulan. One of my favorites. Did she mistake Faroush for a girl? Or is it someone else? Looking forward to more.