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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey your story is great! Keep it up man!
...sorry. I cant really think of anything useful to say.
...sorry. I cant really think of anything useful to say.
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good writing... Are you planning on resuming work on this story? I am looking forward to the rest of it. Nice work on the space battle by the way, you do it well.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! this is awesome!! please don't keep us in limbo!
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice this is a great story keep it up! not too displeased about the lack of smut i find it refreshing to read a serious story with a plot (something few writers can pull off now a days). the bit about the reactors in chapter seven about the how the more they crank it up the more power they have to cool the system was suspiciously close to the pillar of autumn's reactor in Halo: the fall of reach, but who cares.good job and i look forward to your next chapters. biyaah!
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! I haven't seen a fight this one sided since Godzilla took on Bambi. Update soon.
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Would've reviewed sooner but I just found out you updated like ten minutes ago. This site really needs an email alert system. There's too many good stories to keep track of.
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Would've reviewed sooner but I just found out you updated like ten minutes ago. This site really needs an email alert system. There's too many good stories to keep track of.
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is some good stuff. Please continue.
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I am very excited to see that somone actully wrote about humans and cornerians interacting! Lol Great job!
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, jobs tend to do that... is sucks, but we still need 'em. I wish you the best of luck finding new employment.
As for chapter 7... sure, it's a whole mess of back-story, but it was chock-full of that same awesomely-worked descriptiveness as the rest. Your take on the end of the planet scenario is certainly a realistic one for the technology. Now, the impatient wait for the next helping of verbal ownage. =P
As for chapter 7... sure, it's a whole mess of back-story, but it was chock-full of that same awesomely-worked descriptiveness as the rest. Your take on the end of the planet scenario is certainly a realistic one for the technology. Now, the impatient wait for the next helping of verbal ownage. =P
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn you update you lazy bastard! Just kiddin! Wow,I am a writer on FFN and rarely come here. You have a good story here. I know that life sucks and that the world should be completely devoted to me and my wants, but people are yet to see that... Well anyways, I don't care about smut and stuff like that, just a good story. So, you are keeping my attention at this rate. Kudo's for being your 11th review.
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. When will the next chapter come out, cause I am anxious to see it in it's completion.