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for Love & Betrayal

by Morwenya

person Birdie
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, I'd like to see the sequal very much! Although it would be great to see more sappy Sparda/Mundus, I don't think the hate between them can be so easily cast aside. ...plus, Sparda would be married. Sigh, why can't love and life be easier? Your last chapter was very sad... ;_;
person Qui
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, now that the Love's gone, there goes the Betrayal. This all happened so quickly, and I understand Mundus's need to "pay back" Sparda immediately after Haures's death-Sparda took from him what Haures took from Sparda so long ago, it almost seems unjustifiable. Layer that on top of Mundus's hurt over his separation from his lover, and you've got ingredients for vengeance on both fronts. Sad to see. I wish there was a second chance in here, I kinda was hoping for more happier times between Sparda and Mundus, they most certainly make a rare, but interesting couple possibility in the Devil May Cry universe. I look forward to more, see ya soon.
person Qui
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so so so very sorry, I'm late in this review of chapter two...here, I'll send over a battle-weary, sweaty,coatless Sparda to massage and play with as a token of appreciation. Now I think Haures is a full-blown bastard officially, I need Sparda to become ultimate God-mode industrial strength Dark Knight so that he can kick the crack out of Haures' azz. Onward to Chapter three- I know it's gonna be good, You are doing a fine job.
person Bustahead
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(whsitles) So I finally find out where you posted this and what can I say? Interested interested!
person Bustahead
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really adore the way you've shown Alastor's character in this! ^_^
person Bustahead
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and THIS would be when he sacrifices the mortal preistess, right?
person Bustahead
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love to be told when the fic gets posted.
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To your question...love it hehe
person Birdie
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sniff! Looks like there will be no more sappy Sparda/Mundus... you make this fangirl sad. ;_; Well, except in a flashback, but sometimes too many flashbacks can be irritating.
This story is going really well! Although the pace is a little fast, and the two demons have an unnatural immunity to pain (Mundus getting impaled by the sword and simply ripping himself off? Although it's possible, I would expect at least a twitch in pain). I don't know why people aren't giving you more reviews... maybe they're uncertain of the pairing (which is definately my OTP).
person Braindead Bird
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What, that's IT?! NOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Please, you must continue! I NEED MORE MUNDUS/SPARDA!!! This fic is so cute, it makes me want to hug something... I implore you to write more!