rate_review Reviews

This isn't to sound insulting, but for the most part your ideas seem very suited for a general fantasy genre rather than just a video game genre. These are -great- stories to read my friend, and I will call you a friend until noted as a hated enemy then I shall be an asshole! The reason I say this is because, while the characters and teh dynamics are great, it seems a little Harry Lou for the Zelda Verse but, it seems -very- capable for let's say the World of Warcraft universe, where your character is 'you', or even the D&D universe, which takes a lot from other fantasy games! The writing is fast paced enough to keep even my sleep depraved mind interested, and that's saying a lot.

What I was going to get on most though was the implementation of the scenes, it's very nondescript but, if you're a good reader it's obvious and I liked it. And as I said it's a great fantasy thing and would actually be capable of being a story in the Heavy Metal comics with just how it is; save... more fighting, sex, and violence! Plus a kick ass ending with all sorts of bad ass! I mean, seriously man, if your lacking reviews is what prevents you from writing then I'll be a god send and let my friends who enjoy this universe to look upon it in awe, because you're a damn, damn, damn good writer!

once again i am riveted by your stories. the amount of plot is sheerly breathtaking. as hard as i try i can find no flaw in any chapter. good job keep it up!

Your story is extremely well-written and interesting, more so than most of the stories in the Zelda section here. I didn't notice any grammatical or spelling errors in your story, but then again I was to absorbed in it to really notice :). I'm sorry you're not getting many reviews, but stopping your story won't help you get them. Even if a lot of people don't seem to appreciate you, the few of us who have reviewed do. I really hope you'll continue posting your story here despite the lack of reviews.

sweet work man. i really wanna see where this leads. i have to say i like fics that dont use link as the lead main charactor. gives the writer and reader more to think about and thus makes it a better story. keep up the good work

This story is fairly interesting and original; I've been reading it for awhile and I've been checking back in hopes of seeing an update or somesuch. Interesting how you still managed to incorporate a Zelda! And it's believable, as far as these fantasy settings go, I mean. I rather like that. Does this story take place many years/decades/centuries/millenia after Wind Waker or something?

As for suggestions and stuff...well, just keep doing whatever it is you're doing. It's working just fine. Please continue the story! If you wind up not posting it, any chance you could e-mail me copies of your story?? =D

~RedGuard6

poor poor din... she always was my favorit. SOMEBODY KILL THAT MAN!