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What!? How could you make Tails gay!?.......-thinks about it-......Man you really can fuck up some of the characters can you? First you make Sonic a rapist, and now this. DAMN! I'd a spilled my drink! Sorry I had to say that. Now Ashura, like BLZF I too wonder what would happen if he collects all the chaos emeralds. Altough unlike BLZF, I've never really liked the idea of super emeralds, the chaos emeralds are supposed to be the ultimate power, the MOST powerfull things to exist. And seeing something surpass that kinda kills the excitement. Let's not do what DBZ/DBGT did and have a limit to power. The chaos emeralds are powerfull enough. Now as for Espio and Mirage, I wonder HOW closely Espio was following her. Hmm..I wonder. Gotta go, Have a nice day!

Not a one chapter smut fic... WOO!

Now that that is out of the way I must congratulate you on a great set of fics. (I've just read them all in order.)
I would explain why your fiction is such good work but I have hade one too many stellas to give a true account of what make a fic good or bad, but I have dub'd your fic Car Crash fanfiction becouse you can't take your eyes away even though sometimes it makes you squerm. To get that level of emotion out of someone is a true gift.

Keep writing and if you keep track, you have a reader from Old Blighty!

You mean to tell me that sombitch Tails is gay?
Well if you do make a yaoi scene with that fox fella in it give me a heads up cuz I dont wanna read no homo stuff.....
I just skip that chapter aight?

Well at least I know what Ashura is doing now. This is getting more interesting too. And I don't know what else to say, so, bye!

Now we get to hear from Ashura. :P
Wonder what next in his plan. :O
Anyway, I have no clue what you guys plan to do with poor Tails but I have a feeling it will turn out worse for him, and better for us. ^_^ Lets see how Mirage will get out of this now, or will she get away from Espio this time. Very nice chapter

HeartOfDarkness

I just have to say that I grow to love this story more and more by each chapter. I love how you make everything so exciting and it's never dull. Each event in the story fits together perfectly! I can't wait to keep on reading it

I'm going to start capitolizing my name, it makes it look cooler. Now Chapter 5, pretty good. It seems like Shadow is quaking in his little jet shoes, but who wouldn't? knowing that there's a being made specifically to kick your ass. I am a little dissapointed that it didn't cover much, but it still is a good chapter. Chapter 5 score= 3 out of 5. Have a nice day!

Still waiting......getting impatient......but sure I won't be disappointed..........I think. Anyway this chapter made a little progress. I'd like to know what the hell Ashura is doing! What is he doing!? Is he jacking off or something!? You should tell us what Ashura is doing. I'm out of things to say so I'll talk to ya next week. Later!

I'm glad to see Shadow back in the show. ^_^
Atleast things seem to be going well for now. Not sure about Ashura though.
Anything could happen with him in the next few chapters, I hope.
And that was a nice end about Mirage’s personality. Can't wait for the next part.

a very thought provoking chapter. do you research these things?