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I believe the fuse has been lit. Soon, the explosive, action-packed, head-spinning events will knock your socks off. Although we readers must wait more time for that. My view of ARAAT3 has changed completely. When I read the first chapter, I thought it was going to be one of those stories where the OC is the whole story. Where the OC is the perfect character, strongest character, smartest, best-looking. The kind where it gets annoying. Know what I mean? Now you HAVE been using Mirage a lot, but you've made it where it's cool, not annoying. I changed my mind about the story ending. Don't ever pay any attention to me if I say anything like that again, I'm an incompetent idiot. You know what you're doing. Congrats on a job well done. Later!

Hmm.. Seems Ashura has a need for control. Need to dominate over others.
If the Master Emerald was broken into pieces and those pieces scattered throughout the Earth, or even universe, would that negate Mirages abilitys over Shadow? I'm glad to see the plot is moving on again, and I am looking forward to the next update, for both here and Bloody Domination.

So is this how you do things? I mean honostly, sex again already? In a piece of work that is well written, sex at every corner just hampers the story line, unless you can write it well enough to carry along. and you my friend, have done just that. Kudos to you for your writing expertise.

Honostly as for how Mirage acted during afore mentioned sex, it was comepletely out of her normal character ways.
You have to make up your mind, she is either cold hearted, and effective like a machine, or has the same flaws as everyother mortal being. I assume you're having her start out rough and tumble, but then her front will crumble as she falls in love? Well, it's been done before, but hopefully you'll be able to pull it off with aplom.

As for Mr. Green hedgehog, I assume you'll leave him with the machine like character personality. However, it would be interesting if you have chosen a path not much taken, where the antagonist succums to mortal flaws.
It would be very interesting if he fell under prey of his own nightmarish powers. But since you most likely have everything already planned out, I don't see how this suggestion would help.

Well, I've left a long enough review, this isn't really my style, but the story just compelled me to review as a true reviewer/ critique. Good luck and godspeed. This is CrazyIvan signing off for now....

It's been awhile since I reviewed this lovely story, so I thought I'd do so while I still have a spare moment.

The whole Mirage/Espio thing sure sounds like it'd make for an interesting relationship. Sex, beat each other up, then have great makeup sex. Who wouldn't want a relationship dynamic like that?

I know I would/do.


And their second love scene was rather creative - bet it educated some people of one of the many uses an extremely long tongue can have. :D

Also, as this latest chapter was the last 'happy' chapter as you call it, I can only wonder if this means we'll soon be finding out where the hell Rouge ended up with Ashura in the previous chapter. I know it's probably not anything good, and given your portfolio, I can expect something seriously sick and twisted.

So....from here on is where it gets good eh? Will the next chapter have the 'head-spinning' event I've been waiting for? Hope so. Even if it doesn't, I know it'll be a good chapter. Later!

Heh, dissipear for awhile and everything changes. Piece by peice everything you used to know shifts just enough to remind you just how unsure you are about everything. Life is a truly absurd thing, on a good day.
I notice this turned into something...well odd. We get to see Espio and Mirage then out of the blue we see that Ashura doesn't waste a lot of time.
I'm not going to say much about privious chapters, simply because I honestly don't feel like it right now, except for your decision of making Tails gay. Of course he could be, he's about around that age where some people question that in themselves.
I can't say much about your Espio/Mirage scenes, except I recall blinking alot. I'm convinced that Espio is not a virgin, he semes too experienced, then again, he's another character who doesn't consider safe sex so mabey he's just easily wrapped up in the need to explore. I'm not saying that their scenes are whats odd about this, just the execution is. I'm sorry, but they have deja-vu written allover them. I can't help but be reminded of Breech and James. Mabey thats why this feels odd. Then again, it was in a way inevitable. How much time did you two put into them?
Damn, Espio know how to use his tongue...
anyway, I'm tired, which means I really should stop.
Oh, almost forgot, great work, even if I'm a bit irritated about how little of Eclipse we get to see. Wasn't Shadow and Amy the origional focus of this fic?
Respectfully yours;
AntwerpsRule

Thanks again for the comments at the start of the chaptor.
I gotta say, you two really know how to write a sex scene.
It really had some length to it, beginning to end.
I can't wait to find out whats coming next chaptor, and knowing what you two did to Shadow, its going to be gruesome. Excellent.

Ah.. If that baby even survives, what kind of powers will it have? And while we are on the note of babys, what about Eclipse? Will the time at GUNs HQ cuase him to change in any way that might aid in stoping Ashura, or perhaps help him in whatever plans he has? Since Shadow, as an Experiment, can go Super with the seven Chaos Emeralds, can Mirage and Ashura as well? Or will they gain some sort of stronger control over their own Chaos Powers?? Perhaps nothing will change at all?

And what of Amy? Will Ashura capture her to cuase Shadow more grief? Will Ashura capture Ecplise just to cuase trouble for his parents? What part will Sonic play in all of this?? Will he die fighting? And couldn't Ashura be taken down by a Dart like Sonic was at GUNs HQ?? Also, will Sonic somehow tap into his Hyper form when/if he fights Ashura?? Could Shadow, also, have a Hyper form? Perhaps.. Now I've thought of something;What about Metal Sonic? As a Machine, would his mind work as a living, breathing creatures, such as Shadows? Could Metal Sonic, or even Metal Shadow/Tails/Knuckles/E-123 Omega beable to stand against Ashura before he gets the Seven Chaos Emeralds?? What about afterwards, if Ashura either does or does not have a Super form??
Well, I'd say thats enough questions for now. An excellent chaptor. Good job.

Oh no! Rouge's pregnant!? Chapter 11 score= 4 out of 5 The baby is obviously Sonic's. This fic DOES put Hollywood to shame as Lizzie said. I mean, really, what the fuck is up with that "Snakes on a Plane" shit!? Hollywood is running out of ideas.

Ahalrighty then, super good, sort of...
Um, yeah...
Well you see we may have a little problem here. Four plus four equals eight, but two peas in a pod can't beat the shit out of each other....
Now about the chapters(10 and 11).
Well, it's alright, a little less constipation a little more action.... Riiight...
Okay then, S'all right, no errors, good formating etc etc, you need more waffles though.
This is CrazyIvan, signing off for now...