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If Shadow represents Hell, and Ashura represents Earth, then whoever represents Heaven (if anyone) would be either Silver the Hedgehog or an original character.

Also, Black Doom was able to use Chaos Control, just like Ashura in this fic, and Shadow was still able to beat him.

Hmm, well this chapter obviously shows your true nature of EVILNESS! <-- Sarcasm.
But I suppose weekly updates can have some baf effects on stories, sometimes good, but sometimes bad, I'd say take enough time to make a great story, but not enough time for insane reviewers to track you down.
As for the chapter, I though you said the lovey dovey stuff was over, this sure looks warm hearted to me, but oh well, as for the grammar/spelling/wtfeverelse it's alright.
I hope the next chapter is better though, you don't need to be going and ruining a perfectly well written fic now do you?
Alright, enough chit chat, this is Crazy Ivan, signing off for now...

I really need to get controll of my activity cycle again..., I got so far behind I went and re-read this whole thing.
What the hell is Ashura trying to do? Does he just want to use the Chaos Emeralds in conjunction with the Master Emeral; or does he just want to ensure that they won't be used against him? He doesn't really need them to use his powers, unless there's some power you haven't shared with us yet. (most likley the second)
"Damnit Charmee thats my beer! Don't drink" That brought back memories. A friend of mine wrote up something he(?) called 'Charmee's drunk adventure', but never published it. Says he(?)'s too shy. Think I'll pressure him(? well, I'm only half sure) again.
0900-VECTOR IS COOL? 0900-832867-47-2665? I think I have a bit too much free time.
I'm just eating up the Shad/amy scenes. Everything to do about a young couple with unreasonable complications, and a baby. Just something that grabs me.
Shadow see's himself as Ashura's opposite? Wonder who the evil half is supposed to be, I'm serious. Being the 'nice' guy is a learned behavior.
Anyway, something tells me I'm on the verge of making an idiot out of myself, if I haven't done that already, so I'll be on my way.
Respectfully yours;
AntwerpsRule

Finally, Eclipse is shown again. If you two do decide to have Ashura win, I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say Eclipse will somehow survive and destroy or just plain murder Ashura in the near enough future, depending on how you play it.
Thats only a guess.
Also, I really want to see some damn action take place! What'll happen when Shadow confronts Ashura? Will Shadow tap into the Chaos Emeralds powers while Ashura is monologing(sP?) about defeating him? And again, that dang Master Emerald. Even if Shadow does go super, will Mirage negate that power with the Master Emerald, considering what we saw in the first chapter?
I wanna see some asskicking. I hope another update happens so soon again(Before Mondays, I mean.)

but i liked the sex! ah well, i also enjoyed the Angel Island Brawl. though Mirage does have kind of an unfair advantage with the Chaos Tempest. otherwise they were pretty equal in strength and it would of been a toss up of who won. is there any particular reason why she can't use the 'Tempest' on Ashura?

Oh, the heroes should win, but it should come at an incredibly high cost. Perhaps almost everybody, including Mirage, Ashura, Tails, Knuckles, Sonic, Shadow, Rouge, Amy, Vector, Charmee... except for Espio. He should live and then have to bear the burden upon which their victory was won. Probably won't happen, but that would be an awesome ending to such a great trilogy.

Chapters 12, 13, 14 score= 4 out of 5. I'm awaiting the showdown. Have a nice day!

Well, a bit short, but eh, an updates an update.
I don't much like the fact you've got Mirage set up to die, but if thats how you want it, so be it. Would it be possible to Chaos Control, not just distance, but through time, if one had all the Emeralds?

Um? How am I never satisfied? That's not kool man, not cool. But on to the thingy.
Wait, I got nothing, it's all pretty good, save for a few things, that I dun remeber from 2 minutes ago because my brain has been fucked over by some wierd ass movie. So I'll leave you with these parting words...

That's great I'm done, where's my chicken wings!?

Woohoo! no more sex! i mean, it's okay to add into fics such as these but i myself am a non-stop action type of person. =] i love this fic alot. keep up the good work!