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Excellent idea on seperating them.
And I'll guess his greatest fear is amoung these:
Seeing Amy tortured like he was by Gun.
Seeing himself and/or both he and Amy tortured again by Gun.
Eclipse and Amy dead and Maria dying again.
And thats all that presently comes to mind.

I don't know why, but I was cracking up during that whole dialogue between Sonic and Mirage in this latest chapter. Sounds likes like a mix of something you'd hear from him in Sonic Adventure/a really dramatic after school special.

However, I have to admit that it makes a point, if not for the simple fact that you've added several flaws to his character with each story. His raping of Amy, along with the resulting guilt and self-mutilation really make it out as if he'd be one of the last people you'd be hearing 'let's save the world' from.

But if someone with that many issues can get up and fight/support a good cause, it makes it all the more believable.

(funkman's head spins 720 degrees.)

AAHH! You truly are evil! Making me wait another week to see Shadow's deepest fear! I'll be waiting till next time. Later!

Chapter 17 score= 4.5 out of 5. Brilliant! I'm definitely going to read the next chapter as soon as I can. Have a nice day!

It's good to see Sonic get along with everyone. Can't wait for more! Have a nice day!

Well, that was interesting, but it hasn't gone down the evil gu wrenching path you said a few chapters back, I mean, there's obviously still some mushy stuff, so get on with the death and dispair would ya? Never make a promise you won't deliver. Alright, peace out...

(My deepest apologys for not reveiwing before today.)
Thanks for the M.I.R. I'm glad another piece of the series is planned and I look forward to it. I liked Sonic returning to the scene as a good guy again, and since my speculating isn't really proving to be accurate I'll leave it be for now.

It finally seems like Sonic is getting along with everyone. That's good! A Rose and a Thorn 4? I can't wait for it! This chapter made me visualize Sonic the Hedgehog 2 with Amy, Team Chaotix, and Shadow in it. I'm guessing the showdown will be with Ashura and Shadow. Am I right? OR... will it be Ashura, Shadow, Sonic, and Mirage? Dammit! I'm dying to know! Later!

hola otra ves! [hello again!]

los mas que sigen, lo mas interesante que se hace esta estoria [the more you guys go, the more interesting this story gets]

el peleo final va ser algo increible [the final battle is going to be something incredible]

aqui estoy todavia, interesado [i'm still here, interested]

I just got back from the movie theater. I saw the movie: "Jackass: number two." And let me just say, that's got to be the most vulgar, stupid, insipid, disgusting movie I've ever seen! But it's funny as hell! Although, those of you with weak stomachs shouldn't watch it. I garuantee that you'll vomit. I'm serious, they do nasty shit in that movie. Chris drinks horse semen, Steve-O chugs beer into his ass, you know, stuff like that.

Ok, back on topic. I'm thinking Ashura is gonna kick all their asses. Good chapter though, chapter 15 score= 4 out of 5. Have a nice day!