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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Simply amazing story!! XD I love it!!! ^.^
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This really is brilliant stuff. I been reading it since chapter 4 or so was put up, but I've only recently signed on and started posting stuff that I wrote.
You have lots of heavy lesbo sex, and that's always grand. But, personally, I think you should put a little more emphasis on the fight scenes; you're no slouch at those, either.
Can't wait for the next bit!
You have lots of heavy lesbo sex, and that's always grand. But, personally, I think you should put a little more emphasis on the fight scenes; you're no slouch at those, either.
Can't wait for the next bit!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
w00t! Blanks lines. They make things look so much cleaner. Also, the... hint... Miss Spencer might get into dominating Candy for a bit in the future was nice. Can't say I was a big fan of Yukina's gratuitous Engrish, though. That could've been toned down a bit.
Oh, one last thing. Your chapter titles need a bit of cleaning up. You have two Chapter 3s and 9s, but no Chapter 5 or 7.
Oh, one last thing. Your chapter titles need a bit of cleaning up. You have two Chapter 3s and 9s, but no Chapter 5 or 7.
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty nice story. Well-written and everybody sounds pretty much in character. Please keep it up.
The only 'complaint' -if you can even call it that- I have is that I prefer blank lines between lines of dialogue. To me it makes the whole thing look cleaner. But your current format is OK too, so whatever.
The only 'complaint' -if you can even call it that- I have is that I prefer blank lines between lines of dialogue. To me it makes the whole thing look cleaner. But your current format is OK too, so whatever.
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The chapter's good, although I will admit I was hoping for Spencer/Candy and some Anesthesia. Is this the end of the fic?
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, gotta ask is Mistress making an appearance?
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January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, from 2 of RR best character's; Miss Spencer and Candy Cane.
ch.1 is well-done, setting the tone, a bit of interesting backstory.
ch.1 is well-done, setting the tone, a bit of interesting backstory.
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December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic, I prefer there to be actual sex but this is hot enough as is. The characterization is good too, and helps it make the jump from 'good' to 'great'. As a note, you'll probably get more reviews if you allow anonymous reviewers.
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is most likely a moot point, seeing as how you havn't updated in over a year, but are you going to finish this fic? There are three, count em', three, Rumble Roses smut works here, and the other two suck. This is good, if only you would finish it. Please?
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks writing my favorite Rumble Roses yuri pairing and I hope enjoy the next chapther