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July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very romantic and touching! I loved it!
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I didn't notice that the grammar was off. It might have been. There were a few things I had to read twice sometimes though (It might just be my brain ;P). I liked your story, and I am looking forward to the next chapter. The idea with the cookie was a great idea *snickers*! Though I hope that the effect doesn't wear off too quickly... >D Keep the good work up!
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love your story... and i deeply desire to read the next chapter
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its a good concept, but your grammar is a TAD off....just needs more commas where there should be...more commas. X333 good job!
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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.