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July 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell O_O That was something indeed. Very much enjoyed the way Ryu/Bayo's personality and character feed into their individual actions and interactions. And the pacing of their rather lengthy sexual experience was pulled off quite well, I think. Now I'm left wondering how much time really has passed...
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July 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Ryu will get Sonia next. He should. Keep going!
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July 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back to the stage of History, Maestro!
It has begun... *cue Mortal Kombat movie theme*... Again.
So will this new arc be a Fate of Two Worlds deal or more of A Crisis of Infinite Earths? Looking forward to a wild ride. ;-)
Ahem. I've always wanted to read a ninja scene with Kasumi, Ayane, Momiji (now a DOA and Warriors Orochi babe), Benikage, Mai Shiranui, Taki, Ibuki (Street Fighter), Hibana (Kunoichi aka Nightshade), Kunimitsu (Tekken), Tsunade & Mei Terumi (Naruto), Maki (Final Fight), Asagi Igawa (Taimanin Asagi), Mistral (Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance)...
P.S. Bayoninja chapter was awesome. You absolutely nailed it (pun intended)!
It has begun... *cue Mortal Kombat movie theme*... Again.
So will this new arc be a Fate of Two Worlds deal or more of A Crisis of Infinite Earths? Looking forward to a wild ride. ;-)
Ahem. I've always wanted to read a ninja scene with Kasumi, Ayane, Momiji (now a DOA and Warriors Orochi babe), Benikage, Mai Shiranui, Taki, Ibuki (Street Fighter), Hibana (Kunoichi aka Nightshade), Kunimitsu (Tekken), Tsunade & Mei Terumi (Naruto), Maki (Final Fight), Asagi Igawa (Taimanin Asagi), Mistral (Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance)...
P.S. Bayoninja chapter was awesome. You absolutely nailed it (pun intended)!
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July 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Its wonderful to see that you're back and still writing! I've been looking forward to a second bayonetta chapter ever since the first and this was very well done. You characterized her very well throughout the entire chapter, and that makes the sex between her and ryu even more satisfying and enjoyable. The "perpetual climax" was a neat idea that I enjoyed, and it'd be interesting to see how you use it in later chapters (if at all).
Either way, thank you for continuing with this story and I hope we won't have to wait nearly as long for your next update!
Either way, thank you for continuing with this story and I hope we won't have to wait nearly as long for your next update!
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August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not a review for you whole work, just for chapter 49 which was recommended to me as a good Bayonetta fic. And oh boy was it right. It was really good, the action, the erotism and the sex was great. You certainly piqued my interest in this story, even though I read the chapter for Bayonetta. Would love to see you do a fic for her game amping up the already oversexed witch. Anyway great read, I'll be reading this from the begginning now.
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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's sort of been a while since we got anything out of this story. It's weird because Tycho does such great stuff but the updates are spread out over a long time and sporadic. He does a great job but man the wait inbetween sometimes takes about forever.
If this story has concluded I would hope he could provide some commentary and at least say what is going on. He used to provide a lot of commentary for his earlier chapters which he (she maybe?) eventually stopped doing. I think the Duke Nukem/Tomb Raider crossover is also over or at least it seems to have reached a climax and conclusion of sorts. Just wanted to know if we've seen the same thing happen here with Ryu moving into the events of NGS II.
If this story has concluded I would hope he could provide some commentary and at least say what is going on. He used to provide a lot of commentary for his earlier chapters which he (she maybe?) eventually stopped doing. I think the Duke Nukem/Tomb Raider crossover is also over or at least it seems to have reached a climax and conclusion of sorts. Just wanted to know if we've seen the same thing happen here with Ryu moving into the events of NGS II.
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May 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love this fic and hoping for an update... maybe a crossover into another franchise.
I hope "retirement" doesn't mean what I think it means.
I hope "retirement" doesn't mean what I think it means.
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April 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! Your story was pretty awesome! A great man deserves great women, after all! lol Well, I just wanted to point out, that I think you underpowered Ryu a lot as a character... I mean, after playing Ninja Gaiden, for Xbox, or any of the other modern Ninja Gaiden games, you realize thet Ryu hayabusa, it's mostly human, just in appeareance, and maybe soul... Ryu, almost in strength to Tina? And Kasumi, being able to hold the Super Ninja's Ryuken (dragon Sword...? That's ridiculous! It makes me laugh like crazy! xD The only way any other character could beat Ryu on any kind of strength, it's on DOA games, and that's because, you have to keep the game balanced, and can't overpower any character... But, regarding every character's abilities, Ryu could be opposed by Dante for DMC series, or Kratos from God of War... Any than that, you story rocks! You rock!
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March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm instead of pairing Momiji with Ryu, why not expand the NGS2 rescue scene of Sanji? Momiji could give Sanji some 'special instruction'?
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March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
First and foremost, I want to say this fic is awesome.
I know the 3D Ninja Gaiden games are suppose to happen before any of the DOA games but I love the progression in this.
There are like 6 women in Ninja Gaiden Sigma 2: Ayane, Rachel, Momiji, Elizebet, Sonia/Irene, and Kasumi. I think you should do what you do best: go in a direction you want to. It doesn't have to be tied up canonically and if past chapters are anything to go by, you usually do your best stuff doing so.
One thing though that I wish you'd reconsider is how you distribute the women to the different men. I think you should cut Bayman, Leon, Brad from the pool of women. Since you've chosen Zack & Bass as competitors for RRXXX, they can stay with their established partners i.e. Nikki and Dixie. Helena should be Kokoro's permanent 'partner'... but I'm not aversed to you revisiting the Kokoro x Hitomi x Leifang angle (it should be interesting since you wrote that both Jann Lee and Eliot have a thing for having 2 women at once). Christie... well you sort of hinted something with her and Ryu in the early chapters but I must confess that I'd like to see a chapter with Eliot on hand for an actual demonstration of Christie's 'finger trick' on Hitomi that you mentioned (chapter 25).
The Kasumi x Tina was a great touch and honestly it reminded me that I'd like to see more pairings, especially unlikely ones, with the girls that you haven't touched upon. For example Kasumi and Helena are both MILFs but they haven't had a scene together and Kokoro x Helena is heavily referenced but they don't even have a dedicated paragraph for their relationship and the one time we see them go down on each other (Zach Attack) it's like an afterthought. Tina I think should not just be Zack's manager but sort of hands-on GM/trainer for like the RRXXX participants, especially on giving practical advice on the girls to 'improve' their performance
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Have you given any thought to extending the crossover to other fighting games? DOA5 has Virtua Fighter's Akira Yuki as a guest and maybe that's one avenue worth investigating. Also Soulcalibur 5 introduced the concept of Astral Chaos, a dimensional nexus where thoughts and dreams can be given shape and the laws of time are malleable -- perfect for a Time Travel chapter if you're ever in the mood.
Hope to read more of this series. ^_^
I know the 3D Ninja Gaiden games are suppose to happen before any of the DOA games but I love the progression in this.
There are like 6 women in Ninja Gaiden Sigma 2: Ayane, Rachel, Momiji, Elizebet, Sonia/Irene, and Kasumi. I think you should do what you do best: go in a direction you want to. It doesn't have to be tied up canonically and if past chapters are anything to go by, you usually do your best stuff doing so.
One thing though that I wish you'd reconsider is how you distribute the women to the different men. I think you should cut Bayman, Leon, Brad from the pool of women. Since you've chosen Zack & Bass as competitors for RRXXX, they can stay with their established partners i.e. Nikki and Dixie. Helena should be Kokoro's permanent 'partner'... but I'm not aversed to you revisiting the Kokoro x Hitomi x Leifang angle (it should be interesting since you wrote that both Jann Lee and Eliot have a thing for having 2 women at once). Christie... well you sort of hinted something with her and Ryu in the early chapters but I must confess that I'd like to see a chapter with Eliot on hand for an actual demonstration of Christie's 'finger trick' on Hitomi that you mentioned (chapter 25).
The Kasumi x Tina was a great touch and honestly it reminded me that I'd like to see more pairings, especially unlikely ones, with the girls that you haven't touched upon. For example Kasumi and Helena are both MILFs but they haven't had a scene together and Kokoro x Helena is heavily referenced but they don't even have a dedicated paragraph for their relationship and the one time we see them go down on each other (Zach Attack) it's like an afterthought. Tina I think should not just be Zack's manager but sort of hands-on GM/trainer for like the RRXXX participants, especially on giving practical advice on the girls to 'improve' their performance
http://hijiribe.donmai.us/data/67a9a1186526dd2b4f299d549e497aff.jpg
http://hijiribe.donmai.us/data/2cbb05c339ebd8751fcdd6af43618f88.jpg
http://hijiribe.donmai.us/data/91498cd7a8ab20bfa73fd1434bfed84b.jpg
Have you given any thought to extending the crossover to other fighting games? DOA5 has Virtua Fighter's Akira Yuki as a guest and maybe that's one avenue worth investigating. Also Soulcalibur 5 introduced the concept of Astral Chaos, a dimensional nexus where thoughts and dreams can be given shape and the laws of time are malleable -- perfect for a Time Travel chapter if you're ever in the mood.
Hope to read more of this series. ^_^