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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That comment was about Hitomi and Lei Fang, by the by.
And whoever is whining about "the lack of oral sex ruining it" do shut it. If you want oral sex read pretty much any other fic on this site. Most of these encounters seem to be about the women getting what they want in return for something. Most women don't get as much out of sucking a dick as you'd like to think. God forbid one story doesn't dwell on that one sex act. I think that the fact that the author doesn't need to rely on using blowjobs to make the story erotic is a real positive.
And whoever is whining about "the lack of oral sex ruining it" do shut it. If you want oral sex read pretty much any other fic on this site. Most of these encounters seem to be about the women getting what they want in return for something. Most women don't get as much out of sucking a dick as you'd like to think. God forbid one story doesn't dwell on that one sex act. I think that the fact that the author doesn't need to rely on using blowjobs to make the story erotic is a real positive.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Elliot's grown quite a bit, having become Hitomi's love, and having shown the other women he's no kid anymore, but a young man wanting to come into his own. With Ryu's help, he does so (and gives enough so Zack isn't left out either).
In the latest chapter, we see Ryu Hayabusa showing his love for both sisters, but we also see him grow as a man when the birth of Taki makes him a father. Here we see his warmth for his new little girl.
When Hayate comes to give him the news of Alpha and Beta's "road rampage" Ryu knows more about Kasumi's anguish about Alpha's existence.
When Rachel returns to help the two super-ninjas fight the fiends, Ryu takes more an appreciation of her. Almost like the "Ninja Gaiden Sigma" for the PS3.
Finally when the feral lust overcomes Rachel and she wants Ryu, he does not make the mistake of denying her. (Earlier it was because he didn't want to force himself on her, here she knows what she wants and won't take "no" for an answer.)
It does bear a few questions, though. Did Ayane or Rachel conceive, as Kasumi had earlier, and we're sure Helena did as well?
And as hinted in an earlier review, might there be a "Ninja Gaiden Koibito: The Next Generation" in the future?
In the latest chapter, we see Ryu Hayabusa showing his love for both sisters, but we also see him grow as a man when the birth of Taki makes him a father. Here we see his warmth for his new little girl.
When Hayate comes to give him the news of Alpha and Beta's "road rampage" Ryu knows more about Kasumi's anguish about Alpha's existence.
When Rachel returns to help the two super-ninjas fight the fiends, Ryu takes more an appreciation of her. Almost like the "Ninja Gaiden Sigma" for the PS3.
Finally when the feral lust overcomes Rachel and she wants Ryu, he does not make the mistake of denying her. (Earlier it was because he didn't want to force himself on her, here she knows what she wants and won't take "no" for an answer.)
It does bear a few questions, though. Did Ayane or Rachel conceive, as Kasumi had earlier, and we're sure Helena did as well?
And as hinted in an earlier review, might there be a "Ninja Gaiden Koibito: The Next Generation" in the future?
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It seems as if this fic will not end. Not to say it is a bad thing. I enjoy what you have done. Damn that Hayabusha and Elliot. Lucky bastards. Continue to update you work dude. oh and when you do end this lemon end it with a Kasumi/Ayane/Rachel/Ryu orgy if you can.
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol Taki :D
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 27
The plot thickens! Just when I thought you'd conclude it with an epilogue, you manage to concoct another tale to not only prolong our enjoyment of your work, but to also give more depth to these characters and explore their world. Bravo.
I'm curious what you have in store for Ryu, Elliot, and Hayate. Looking forward to umm Kasumi x Ayane x Christie (just guessing).
The plot thickens! Just when I thought you'd conclude it with an epilogue, you manage to concoct another tale to not only prolong our enjoyment of your work, but to also give more depth to these characters and explore their world. Bravo.
I'm curious what you have in store for Ryu, Elliot, and Hayate. Looking forward to umm Kasumi x Ayane x Christie (just guessing).
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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A great mix of wild sex and passion in the 24th chapter!!!
PERFECT!!!
PERFECT!!!
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent ch.25. I like how you established that this is not merely a coming of age journey for Elliot but also a form of validation that he's also a man worthy of recognition just like Hayabusa. I'm anxious to see where you'll take this next.
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow i got the chapter right, well kinda!!! Anyway great intense scene as always, as i see it in DOA TN also hints Tina and Lisa as lesbians.
How the story unfolds is great also
How the story unfolds is great also
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, you are obviously going with an Eliot/Christie scene for the next chapter. When they do it, please add many positions. Give Eliot a chance on top, too. Maybe have Christie on her hands and knees, getting drilled by Eliot from behind, with Christie being surprised at how wild Eliot can be.
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 24 was excellent! Perfect way for Christie and Elliot's meeting and yet another well-scripted set-up for the ensuing carnal act (Thank you for finally including Elliot x Christie in your epic fic!). I enjoyed how you incorporated scenes from the game and that one Rumble Roses reference in the plot. Bravo.
So is it going to be Elliot's story from now on or are you planning to have some "instant action" scenes with Ryu interspersed or bring him back after completing Elliot's narration of events?
So is it going to be Elliot's story from now on or are you planning to have some "instant action" scenes with Ryu interspersed or bring him back after completing Elliot's narration of events?