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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
needs moar Helena/Christie or Kasumi/Ayane :D
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October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey wow, never expected to find a story with one man going around sleeping with several women a good read but yours has pleasantly surprised me! It's very well researched, you've got a good feel for the characters - and Ryu sounds like a great lover which I'm happy about since I quite like him *wink*...
And as for your little blurb at the end of the first chapter (I do intend to read more in time don't worry ^^) I completely agree with everything, so many fanfictions (including mine I'm ashamed to say, though I intend to change this shortly) do start a sex scene with some sort of fellatio or the like, and that does become rather dull and demeaning in a way so thank you so much for expressing these things so eloquently! Great work, you've done well!
And as for your little blurb at the end of the first chapter (I do intend to read more in time don't worry ^^) I completely agree with everything, so many fanfictions (including mine I'm ashamed to say, though I intend to change this shortly) do start a sex scene with some sort of fellatio or the like, and that does become rather dull and demeaning in a way so thank you so much for expressing these things so eloquently! Great work, you've done well!
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tycho,
It looks like La Mariposa got make amends to Hayate after all;P
And for Hayate, it was none too soon--the matings of his sisters and Hayabusa would drive a man mad if he knew he couldn't have anything like that. Looks like some fair play came at the right time. The better to start the healing for a man who has a baby niece and a brother-in-law (has Hayabusa sprung for a ring for Kasumi, or is he going to get matching ones for her and Ayane?).
And Lisa gets to put her second recorded "ninja mark" on her scoreboard;P
Scalon
It looks like La Mariposa got make amends to Hayate after all;P
And for Hayate, it was none too soon--the matings of his sisters and Hayabusa would drive a man mad if he knew he couldn't have anything like that. Looks like some fair play came at the right time. The better to start the healing for a man who has a baby niece and a brother-in-law (has Hayabusa sprung for a ring for Kasumi, or is he going to get matching ones for her and Ayane?).
And Lisa gets to put her second recorded "ninja mark" on her scoreboard;P
Scalon
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE FASTER, DAMMIT!
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
28 kinda makes sense since Lisa was 1st introduced in DOAXBV as a classy office lady. Making her a former emloyee of DOATEC works. Can we count on Ryu running across Tina since Hayate x Lisa already happened?
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to do some kind of foursome next chapter with Ryu, Hayate, Lisa, and Rachel? Or at least another sex scene involving Hayate and Lisa?
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! The sex was very...provocative, I must say >.> anyway, what you really need to do is finish up that hox scene with Rachel and Tina. It sounded like it would make quite a story.
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I love the inclusion of Ryu.
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The only "lesbian tendencies" I've heard of occurred in the volleyball game, which was basically a wet dream of one of the male characters. The games that aren't dream sequences and fit into the storyline imply heterosexuality. Sorry, fanboys.