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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An amazing piece of work. Never have I read a story on this site or any other fancition archive that has gotten me so immersed. Perfect combination of action, story and sex, all of which are highly entertaining and superbly written.
Sex scenes are tasteful and creative, not to mention extremely erotic, the multiple pairings each character is involved in adds to the hilarity and casual nature of the sex.
You sir, are a genius, when a fic is this good even 31 chapters just isnt enough. I certainly look forward to seeing more, XD
Sex scenes are tasteful and creative, not to mention extremely erotic, the multiple pairings each character is involved in adds to the hilarity and casual nature of the sex.
You sir, are a genius, when a fic is this good even 31 chapters just isnt enough. I certainly look forward to seeing more, XD
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another fien chapter of lemoness completed. Kokoro and Brad has to be one of the strangest DOA pairings I have seen and trust em I have seen quite some that deserve the WTF? It was about time Ryu showed those two jacksass clones who's the real boss around these parts.
As the old saying goes it always the shy ones. A gesiha is anything but innocent. Yeah for public sex. Update very soon
As the old saying goes it always the shy ones. A gesiha is anything but innocent. Yeah for public sex. Update very soon
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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What's going to happen to Leon and Helena? Is Helena still doign it with Christie secretly liek what happened with Hitomi and Lei Fang despite them both having boyfriends.
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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How many more chapters will this be? Is it almsot done? So now Kokoro and Brad are a couple. No complains there. I think if I am corret everyone has been paired up with someone. This is indeed the best lemon stroy that contains avery excellent plot with it.
I am surpirsed Ryu was able to contain hismelf knowign that he had previously fucked Hitmoi and Lei Fang.
I am assuming the next chapter will have him making up with Ayane and Kasumi right. Please let it be the case. Are there any plans oof makign an orgy witht he couples. I priase you and hope you will update very soon.
I am surpirsed Ryu was able to contain hismelf knowign that he had previously fucked Hitmoi and Lei Fang.
I am assuming the next chapter will have him making up with Ayane and Kasumi right. Please let it be the case. Are there any plans oof makign an orgy witht he couples. I priase you and hope you will update very soon.
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I could totaly see a Kasumi/Ayane vs Tina for a grand finale, power vs speed, which the kunoichis should win of course
And Tycho i must urge you to end the story since the main characters have played their part and draging the story longer could lead it to becoming really cheesy
As i said you should end it with a sex battle where Kasumi and Ayane defeat Tina to end the story with a conclusion point
Any further character development can be done in a seperate story, for example you mentioned Tina/Lisa relationship. I think that would be great for a couple of chapters
Anyway, plot,theme,characters,setting, you describe everything like it should be so naturally you're a great writer
And Tycho i must urge you to end the story since the main characters have played their part and draging the story longer could lead it to becoming really cheesy
As i said you should end it with a sex battle where Kasumi and Ayane defeat Tina to end the story with a conclusion point
Any further character development can be done in a seperate story, for example you mentioned Tina/Lisa relationship. I think that would be great for a couple of chapters
Anyway, plot,theme,characters,setting, you describe everything like it should be so naturally you're a great writer
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great to see that you continued your amazing story. That last chapter pairing Christie with Bayman was a surprise mostly because the only thing that stands out that they have in common is their profession. Now about the "wealth distribution" that Scalon referred to, I understand the reasoning for it but it would've been amazing if you could 1 last orgy sequence with all of the girls & Hayabusa (like an extended version of chapter 8 with all of them in the hut).
So then we have Kokoro, Brad, Helena(whatever happened to her "pregnancy"?), Leon(French and still in love with Roland)... I wonder what you can do with them.
Tina - Any chance you could match her prowess against Ryu's remaining harem (Kasumi, Ayane, and now Rachel) considering her fabled weeklong escapade with our hero OR maybe just have a threesome with her and the 2 ninja sisters with Ryu stumbling upon them in surprise?
So then we have Kokoro, Brad, Helena(whatever happened to her "pregnancy"?), Leon(French and still in love with Roland)... I wonder what you can do with them.
Tina - Any chance you could match her prowess against Ryu's remaining harem (Kasumi, Ayane, and now Rachel) considering her fabled weeklong escapade with our hero OR maybe just have a threesome with her and the 2 ninja sisters with Ryu stumbling upon them in surprise?
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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stellar job there. It´s a nice and sweet thing you branced off and let the the other DOA women get paired up with the males. Ryu might as well form a small harem since I doubt Rachael will let him be anymore after eing fucked soo good in the alley. Who is up next Tina or maybe Kokoro. In the future how about you do a foursome with Ryu,Kasumi,Ayane and Rachael. Regarding this chapter that is quite a kink having sex out in public.
You keep up with those lemon filled chapters. I also love the story this lemon has.
Peace otu and update
You keep up with those lemon filled chapters. I also love the story this lemon has.
Peace otu and update
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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Best Dead or alive lemon I have ever seen. You gotta continue with this woudnerful peice of art.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanna see more Eliot/Hitomi action please, kudasai
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Tycho,
Looks like the "Beta Build" chapters are "share the sexual wealth" ones where other guys, like Hayate with Lisa and Jann Lee with Leifang get to enjoy the sexual blessings Ryu Hayabusa had been given. (Eliot had already shown true love to Hitomi.) Which is fair, since even if you fortify a superninja sexually, he's gonna be stretched pretty thin:P (When the last part of the "End Game" chapter was wrapping up, the girls looked hungrily at Ryu and in their minds, the words "Charge!" and "Banzai!" came to mind as they went on him. Oh to have been in Ryu's shoes:P)
Scalon
Looks like the "Beta Build" chapters are "share the sexual wealth" ones where other guys, like Hayate with Lisa and Jann Lee with Leifang get to enjoy the sexual blessings Ryu Hayabusa had been given. (Eliot had already shown true love to Hitomi.) Which is fair, since even if you fortify a superninja sexually, he's gonna be stretched pretty thin:P (When the last part of the "End Game" chapter was wrapping up, the girls looked hungrily at Ryu and in their minds, the words "Charge!" and "Banzai!" came to mind as they went on him. Oh to have been in Ryu's shoes:P)
Scalon