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December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn you are awesome. You've found a way to bring a huge amount of life back into an already epic story. Now I really really can't wait for the next chapter. Ryu is one lucky bastard.
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December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Truly a written masterpiece Tycho, you've really captured and combined the essence of storytelling and sex perfectly. I kinda find the beta build obvious and bland compared to the other parts of the story but it is great anyway.
On to the next item i really find your chapters with Tina to be the best, probably because she is the best sexually described character in the game and i hope Tina and Lisa switch to main female status due to the change of the theme to wrestling and i hope you include female vs female action, not just Ryu. Personally i would like to request Candy Cane vs Tina due to both being rockstars, if it goes well with the story of course. The matches should also include humiliation moves like in rumble roses.
And about the storyline i have no doubts that you will have no problem in having the same status as the rest of the Koibito!!!
On to the next item i really find your chapters with Tina to be the best, probably because she is the best sexually described character in the game and i hope Tina and Lisa switch to main female status due to the change of the theme to wrestling and i hope you include female vs female action, not just Ryu. Personally i would like to request Candy Cane vs Tina due to both being rockstars, if it goes well with the story of course. The matches should also include humiliation moves like in rumble roses.
And about the storyline i have no doubts that you will have no problem in having the same status as the rest of the Koibito!!!
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November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, NOW we're getting really kinky:P
The thing is, how are you going to do this, Tycho? One thought: Have the "Heel Roses" face off against Hayabusa, and he takes them in the ring. After they cum and cum, Hayabusa takes them out of the ring, to where their "face" sides want some ninja loving too.
During this time, we could find the girls have trouble flipping the "heel/face" switches continuously, so Hayabusa helps them find a totally-neutral self for outside the ring), and one for the private bedroom (this one could be a merged one who enjoys the sex and in this form both heel and face feel it).
Three questions though:
1) Will there be a "time trial" like before near the end? (Going through the whole gamut of Rumble Roses in an hour: you come before then, you LOSE)
2) Will they be "kayfabe" (known in wrestling speak as "in character") always or will there be a time they'll be themselves, neither face or heel, once they're in private?
3) How will Hayabusa get the girl to signify he's won (maybe wear a special golden choker collar he places around her neck--one with the raised form of a Dragon on it)? The more he's beaten (and won their hearts in the meantime) the more they'll aid him in keeping the matches fair (say like keeping Mistress Spencer's or Anesthesia's/Dr. Cutter's boy-toys out of action so Hayabusa can concentrate on their female handler). We could always have a silhouette of Hayabusa preparing for battle and before he puts his hood on, Tina or one of the other girls he's beaten/won over can give him a pep talk and a deep kiss for luck. One almost wonders if The Black Belt Geisha and the Princess of Wolves (the heel forms of Makoto Aihara and Aigle) would be wicked forms of Hitomi and Leifang:P
The thing is, how are you going to do this, Tycho? One thought: Have the "Heel Roses" face off against Hayabusa, and he takes them in the ring. After they cum and cum, Hayabusa takes them out of the ring, to where their "face" sides want some ninja loving too.
During this time, we could find the girls have trouble flipping the "heel/face" switches continuously, so Hayabusa helps them find a totally-neutral self for outside the ring), and one for the private bedroom (this one could be a merged one who enjoys the sex and in this form both heel and face feel it).
Three questions though:
1) Will there be a "time trial" like before near the end? (Going through the whole gamut of Rumble Roses in an hour: you come before then, you LOSE)
2) Will they be "kayfabe" (known in wrestling speak as "in character") always or will there be a time they'll be themselves, neither face or heel, once they're in private?
3) How will Hayabusa get the girl to signify he's won (maybe wear a special golden choker collar he places around her neck--one with the raised form of a Dragon on it)? The more he's beaten (and won their hearts in the meantime) the more they'll aid him in keeping the matches fair (say like keeping Mistress Spencer's or Anesthesia's/Dr. Cutter's boy-toys out of action so Hayabusa can concentrate on their female handler). We could always have a silhouette of Hayabusa preparing for battle and before he puts his hood on, Tina or one of the other girls he's beaten/won over can give him a pep talk and a deep kiss for luck. One almost wonders if The Black Belt Geisha and the Princess of Wolves (the heel forms of Makoto Aihara and Aigle) would be wicked forms of Hitomi and Leifang:P
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November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol You've finally done it! A true to goodness Rumble Roses crossover on the way! Can't wait to see what you have in mind for that contest. I just hope Ryu's contenders include Benikage/Yasha.
Speaking of women comparing notes on the men's prowess, the last time you left Elliot & Hitomi alone with Jann Lee & Leifang going about their business a room. Seeing as how their women are already more than friends, I was wondering if you're open to the idea of writing a non-yaoi foursome? That's one way to completely let bygones be bygones and have Elliot be treated as Jann Lee's equal since Elliot already had his way with both Hitomi and Leifang at the same time.
Speaking of women comparing notes on the men's prowess, the last time you left Elliot & Hitomi alone with Jann Lee & Leifang going about their business a room. Seeing as how their women are already more than friends, I was wondering if you're open to the idea of writing a non-yaoi foursome? That's one way to completely let bygones be bygones and have Elliot be treated as Jann Lee's equal since Elliot already had his way with both Hitomi and Leifang at the same time.
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November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Rumble Roses crossover? Interesting! Looking forward to the next chapters.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow what can I say, this fic is what got me into AFF when it was only the encounter saga. Then as it progressed, also got me into the Ninja Gaiden games. 34 chapters and I still haven't had enough. Please keep writing! Can't wait to see what else you've got in store
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, but it seems Ryu is losing more and more women to other guys. I know Rachel asked Lisa this early, but who are the best men in the story in Bed. I know Ryu is probably the number one though, but with the exception of Ryu and Hayete, none of the others have been compared.
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so you do plan on making more chapters or is it done for now? couse i want to see how ayane gets along with rachel since they partner up lol
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing work, don't stop the music!
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You just can't keep a determined pair of clones down, heh...that was very interesting, where they needed their originals for which to learn about love. Linking with Ryu and Kasumi, Beta and Alpha became more than male and female.
And Kokoro decides she'll stand by Helena while Christie and Helena decide their love-hate relationship needs them both to be together.
Rachel tossed her chips in with Kasumi and Ayane, and all's well with Hayabusa once more:)
And Kokoro decides she'll stand by Helena while Christie and Helena decide their love-hate relationship needs them both to be together.
Rachel tossed her chips in with Kasumi and Ayane, and all's well with Hayabusa once more:)