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Ok first to commend on the great story you are writing, it is a great tale of erotic expressions and adventure!!!

I'm more of a Rumble Roses fan but i'm also familiar with the DOA characters and both Dead or alive and ninja Gaiden games. Now the sex itself is wonderfully written but i believe you should add more wrestling moves during the sex matches.

How about a tag team match between Candy Cane/Miss Spencer and Tina/Lisa with the clown Sebastian and Ryu Hayabusa at ringside. They could use the humiliation moves and the guys enter the ring to fuck them. Imagine Tina trapped in Candy's Raflesia and while she's spread the clown enters to have sex with her or Lisa locked in the teacher's pet. The same thing goes in reverse with made up humiliation moves for the doa girls.

good start on a new saga. could you show a part on whats been happening with ayane and rachel?

I had my doubts about a sexfight-saga. In my experience sex-fights stories usualy just turn into standard smut. But somehow you're managed to do it in a way thats fresh, intense and interesting, while still keeping setting deeply in mind. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow! This is just such an awesome, well written story! I do not own the games, but my boyfriend does, and I guess I am kinda familiar with the characters... but anyway, this is great stuff! The sex scenes are well written, and a real pleasure to read!

Great chapter. I wish you did more with the Killer Bambies, though. Maybe Ryu could have his way with them backstage before his next match?

Another great chapter, I especially liked the ending when Tina lifted Candy Cane on her shoulders. And the follow ups from chapter to chapter in the whole series are simply amazing

Round 1 pitted the Heel-y Candy Cane against Dragon Ninja (and she got a BIG surprise out of what his classic blue garb hid). I guess that Ryu was "too much business" as he got her off hard too soon, but not always a bad thing. Of course, Tina got "her licks in" too.

So now Ryu's going to have to pace himself better--I hope he learned from Tina's "training sessions" where he can improve his control better too.

Might the next one up be Miss Spencer wanting to avenge her charge's loss, or Mistress Spencer wanting to punish the one who "took her Candy"?

Or Bloody Shadow/Judgement, wanting to render some judgement on this male ninja interloper?

*claps hands*

lmao Tina and Ryu both passed out and had to be hospitalized for a month! Great chapter; you hit all the right notes, especially with how you scripted the sex scenes rather well with all three (or 6) participants.

You said you neglected to give Helena's son with Ryu a name--how about if you give the "Soul Calibur" name as an alias he goes by when fighting, and give him another name that's his real name? That way what we suggested earlier might work.

I think this is going to be the same result as their first meeting; Tina will win. That is only a guess, but knowing how lucky Ryu is, I think he will end up losing to Tina. Wonder if Hayete will get pulled in by Lisa into this?