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Awesome! Another lady in Ryu's harem. Sweeeeet!

Yep. So it was indeed Miyako,Kokoro's mother and Helena Douglas's stepmother who was the one to bed Jo Hayabusa. I am cool with that. It is too bad though that not much information was given on his late wife and Ryu's mother. Still she will more than help him move on. I think though that with Momiji now being included in Ryu's harem that Reiko should be given the boot along with Tina Armstrong. Rachel,Kasumi, Momiji and Ayane are more then enough ladies for him.

Nice! Jo can now live a long life and fight by his son. Sweeeet!

"And whoever is whining about "the lack of oral sex ruining it" do shut it. If you want oral sex read pretty much any other fic on this site. Most of these encounters seem to be about the women getting what they want in return for something. Most women don't get as much out of sucking a dick as you'd like to think. God forbid one story doesn't dwell on that one sex act. I think that the fact that the author doesn't need to rely on using blowjobs to make the story erotic is a real positive." I agree with Val's review. This site is full of oral and anal, this fanfic is hot and erotic and non repetitive and doesnt rely on those acts to be great. And doesnt need them to improve the story. Probably the Anon making those comments are not who they say they are, probably in the closet and wants to project through the lady characters. The can go read the 100s of other fics for that. This fic has taste and class all the while remaining scorching sexy and never fails to arouse. Major kudos to the writer. I'm tired of shills hounding writers to cater to their anal and oral and every story on the net that doesnt cater to those things.

finally caught up with this erotic epic. Please please don't include anal, I like this as pure clean tasteful erotica, it is a masterpiece, besides this website is full of anal, I like some diversity for the people who are not into that stuff. You do remarkably without it. Ryu should keep his sword clean ;)

"A rooster crowed in the distance; another cock welcoming the dawn in its own way." That line alone makes chapter 72 worth the wait.

And we finally have Ayane getting what she longed for quite a while but couldn't have quite yet (thanks to two Umbra witches, a French-speaking heiress, a platinum-blonde assassin, a buxom CIA agent, a redheaded Latina, two Chinese girls, a buxom blonde amnesiac, a Japanese geisha and her daughter, and an aspiring kunoichi and shrine girl). "But now the Student has become the Teacher" fits here; Ayane draws from her experience to unleash Momiji's sexuality. And what an experience Ayane gives the younger girl. It is a very welcome update, my friend. And we're all the better for it :)

Ayane,Momiji and Ryu Hayabusa had quite a bit a fun. I am super glad that Momiji not only to have her first time with her sensei Ryu and included in this story,but the dragon shrine maiden is also going to be a part of his harem. As it should be. Granted it is going to be yet another woman for him to not only pleasure but love her as well. Nobody say being the next in line to lead the Hayabussa ninja clan was going to be easy. Besides the dour Ninja Gaiden women Rachel,Kasumi,Ayane and Momiji are all fantastic strong,deadly, and attractive women in their own rights. Momiji is getting one heck of an education in the arts of sexual intercourse. Ayane and Ryu Hayabusa have held back long enough and now get to catch up intimately. A very funny way of ending this long awaited chapter. I see what you did there. I cannot wait to find out who is this mysterious woman his father Jo has been having sex. I would actually prefer if it is Irene Lew to get her away from Ryu. Heck Miyako,Kokoro's mother, would be a great candidate.

Yeah! Ryu got into a threesome. Sweeeet!

While I am mostly reading this for Bayonetta, as I am quite unfamiliar with most if not all of the DOA cast and other characters you have used, I must say this is one of the most well written stories on this site. You know how to keep things interesting, make characters stand out and prevent all the women from simply blending into one another a thing many writers fail to do once past the third woman.
You've got great detail and I hope you continue writing even if it is only for another Bayonetta chapter, although everything else about the story, despite my ignorance has been incredible.