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by Tycho

person TheTygre
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Would you believe this story is actually the first thing I thought of when I saw Dead Fantasy? I mean, Ayane, Kasumi, and Rachel all in the same place? Now where else have I seen that... Problem is, now I have an entire omniverse running in my mind revolving around the concept, with Ryu still keeping all three girls as his harem/spouses. Well, until Dead Fantasy V came along, that is...
person Scalon
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The Mistress comes out whip cracking, and Hayabusa rises up to the challenge. And Lisa finds a ghost from her past at DOATEC is back in full force. Interesting twist as to why Hayabusa thought Anesthesia was Lisa:P

The previous chapter was every man--or superninja's--fantasy come to life. Tina celebrated Ryu's victory by having Dixie and Rachel come join--and him cum inside--them:P And thus Hayabusa reaffirms his love for them:P

Hayabusa has "risen" to the challenges, and he's not about to stop--I've loved this ever since the first chapters:) Keep it going, my friend.
person VFSNAKE
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Ryu is really pushing himself with the women. If he's not careful...he'll die from it. Then again...what a way to go. LOL!
person TVO
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome stuff, thanks for continuing this story and thanks for the update. The Rumble Roses installments have been the best addition to this series by far. Especially the growing relationship between Tina and Ryu has been awesome to see unfold. I wonder what will happen with both of them.

Seemed pretty obvious to me that Rachel wanted a lot more than just Ryu's loving. Rachel wanted his cum in her uterus hoping to get impregnated with Ryu's baby. Rachel's purpose of the trip is to make a little Ryu or Rachel well besides that she really does love Ryu.

I wonder about Tina though. Now that Tina has this deep found connection and love with Ryu, I can't help but get the feeling that Tina would not be opposed to the idea either. As in making love with Ryu to have his kid. It wasn't quite as clear as it was with Rachel, but I could just be reading into it too much.

Still great update, thanks for posting it. Please bring us more soon!

I also just want to say, I think its awesome how you've continued this series with so many separate storylines. Its almost like a good serialized comic book series with different arcs. You don't effectively end the series. The adventures continue in a new storyline. Just as you recently shifted into this Rumble Roses storyline.
person scalon
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Once again Ryu shows us why he's "the man":P Enjoying Candy's sweetness, then getting a triple helping of "hot blonde fighter"--Tina, Dixie and Rachel. Oh we envy him:P

The only question is when Ryu faces Mistress Spencer whether he can make the warped dominatrix break and snap back. (The Headcrook used Mistress Spencer for "Ryu's Harem" three years ago, and she wasn't a pushover then either:P)

I love what you keep doing, Tycho--raising the bar for Hayabusa so he can keep going over it with each new challenge:)
person VFSNAKE
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Ryu got a lot out of those three. Though will he have kids with them in the near future remains to be seen.
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this almost since the beginning, but only recently did I register on the site myself. Now I'm reviewing all the stories I've always liked, and this is definately one of them.

Keep it up!
schedule July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Three words man. Sweet Nefarian Jesus!! This is by far the most spectacularly devious lemonfic I've ever seen! Calling it epic doesn't really do it justice, for I belive there isn't word yet invented to convey the sense of scale this story goes.

Props to you, man!!!
person scalon
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yup, Tycho, Dixie got what she wanted--a second shot at the Dragon Ninja. And damn if he didn't go the distance with her one more time. This might just give Tina more clout with the Rumble Roses folks later.

And oh, how sweet it would be for the bad girls to get it good when Hayabusa gives them the orgasms they crave:P
person VFSNAKE
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryu. He did so much and now he's frustrated. Well Lisa and Tina along with Becky will have to fix that.