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December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! RYU IS STILL UNDEFEATED! Though what will he do without sex. The ladies need their fix too! Write more ASAP!
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November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. But man could this Ryu Hayabusa´s first loss? Too much is riding on stake for him to not be the victor. After going thru the latest addition of the Rumble Roses ladies you´re missing two not counting the alter egos. Reiko Hinomoto the cover girl for the game and Evil Rose I think her sister or mother can´t remember which. I can forgive Evil Rose but Reiko man come on. It isn´t the same without her. Her, Miss Spencer,Benikage and Candy Cane are my favoriate and hottest chicks. I sure wish you took the time and give her her own chapter. Other than that,keep it up
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. Is that it? He didn't just lose, did he?
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Two things:
1. Great use of "Ninja Dog" to harken back to the in-game insult for the lowest difficulty setting
2. I hate it when women fake it but in this story it was VERY appropriate after all the build-up about his formidable final opponent. The actual outcome you came up with, I think, presents a great opportunity for several post-fight possibilities... that involve finding consolation in the arms of his women -- several of them at one time if possible.
I had a minor complaint about Ayane teasing Elliot back in Chapter 20 which you addressed in the commentary but now that you had that awesome foursome with Hitomi/Eliot/Leifang/Jann Lee... I changed my mind, owing largely in part to how you scripted their scene in chapter 47. I'm not necessarily requesting an Ayane x Eliot scene but I wouldn't mind if your creative faculties lead you in that direction. Come to think of it, Eliot also had no problem gawking at Tina's physique in chapter 21 (where he met Hitomi) and chapter 24 (Eliot meets Christie and watches Tina & Lisa).
1. Great use of "Ninja Dog" to harken back to the in-game insult for the lowest difficulty setting
2. I hate it when women fake it but in this story it was VERY appropriate after all the build-up about his formidable final opponent. The actual outcome you came up with, I think, presents a great opportunity for several post-fight possibilities... that involve finding consolation in the arms of his women -- several of them at one time if possible.
I had a minor complaint about Ayane teasing Elliot back in Chapter 20 which you addressed in the commentary but now that you had that awesome foursome with Hitomi/Eliot/Leifang/Jann Lee... I changed my mind, owing largely in part to how you scripted their scene in chapter 47. I'm not necessarily requesting an Ayane x Eliot scene but I wouldn't mind if your creative faculties lead you in that direction. Come to think of it, Eliot also had no problem gawking at Tina's physique in chapter 21 (where he met Hitomi) and chapter 24 (Eliot meets Christie and watches Tina & Lisa).
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOO! He can't lose! BOOOO! Write more ASAP!
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November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was a nice little break from the main story.
My only suggestion though is it would be kind of neat if you somehow got Sonia in there. Sonia's a total babe and there's not enough good stuff like this out there for her. She totally seemed to have the hots for Ryu in Ninja Gaiden 2.
My only suggestion though is it would be kind of neat if you somehow got Sonia in there. Sonia's a total babe and there's not enough good stuff like this out there for her. She totally seemed to have the hots for Ryu in Ninja Gaiden 2.
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October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wish you could hear how much I clapping I was doing after I read Ch. 47. I'll even admit that I did both types of standing ovation. How the fuck do you manage to outdo yourself? You're that good. No. That AWESOME.
Your (Eliot x Hitomi) x (Jann Lee x Leifang) foursome was WAY better than what I envisioned back when I requested it. More of that please?
Keep on rocking, man.
Your (Eliot x Hitomi) x (Jann Lee x Leifang) foursome was WAY better than what I envisioned back when I requested it. More of that please?
Keep on rocking, man.
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Good shit! Soon Ryu is going to have more hot wild sex then ever before. YAY!
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Or even better yet as another suggestion you could have Momiji spy on Ryu,Ayane,Kasumi and Rachel. That would be awsome. And if possible leave Sonia out of this please. I hope that you do find the time to go a proper chatper containing Ryu,Ayane,Kasumi and Rachel. Keep up the superb work
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... the crosover with Rumble Roses was an excellent touch if I do say so myself. I have only one question though: Have you gotten around to playing NGS2 yet? If so, then will Momiji make an appearance at some point? It doesn't have to be centered around Ryu, in fact, if you wanted to, you could make a straight-shota scene about her and Sanji. But if you don't want to do that sort of thing, that's fine - I might just do it myself.
Thanks!
Thanks!