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for Ninja Gaiden Koibito

by Tycho

person scalon
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How wickedly kinky do you want that to be after Anesthesia is captured? Maybe have her as a human sushi plate, or coated with ice cream, whipped cream, chocolate sauce, nuts and cherries as a "Naughty Nurse Sundae"?:P

Should this be something where Tina gets Helena to get the DOA girls together, while Lisa helps bring the other Rumble Roses around? (Main reason: to celebrate Ryu's crowning as the first male champion of the "Rumble Roses XXX")

And would the guys who'd paired up (Eliot, Jann Lee, Brad Wong, and Bayman) also join once their women had been gifted immortality? Hayate is a no-brainer:P

In the process, might Zack be tempted to lease out Zack Island to Tina and Helena for their "after party" as well as gain tutelage from Ryu himself? (The cash is nice, but the chance to learn firsthand from Ryu Hayabusa even better incentive. Especially if a few new techniques were learned after Eliot shared with Zack:P)

Or Tina might ask the other Rumble Roses to see if they want to do it in the Rumble Roses arena complex in a pay-per-view ladder-style contest--to see how many women Ryu can do until he can't go on per the health analysts with Lisa joining them.

The women might draw numbers--kinda like the "Time Trial" before he got taken out by Alpha-152:P And bets might be made as to how many women he can lay and how much time he takes per woman, for the whole run, or on average:P

So much you can play with.
person scalon
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And thus we now have the ability for Ryu to extend the lives of those he mates with:P I think to be fair, to ease the tension with Hayate, that while Ryu gets with Lisa and Fujiko, that Hayate enjoy the tenderness of Reiko and Tina. Just so it can make Hayate feel things are more "all in the family";P

A few other things though--now that Anesthesia has been captured, should she get a taste of her own medicine as the others find the nasty nurse wanted to not just to gain immortality, but also turn everyone's favorite super ninja into a monster?

Or she can find the other girls have recipes for "Just Desserts" as well that would give her the "All You Can Eat" deal:P
person Watcher
schedule June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An interesting twist, though I wonder how poor Eliot will feel about growing old and dying as Hitomi stays young and beautiful forever.
person VFSNAKE
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! Ryu got laid and now the the bitchy evil nurse is going to get what's coming to her. LOL!
person TVO
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great update. Nice little story chapter for the most part. I can't wait to see what happens when Bayonetta comes back.

I was a little surprised by the outcome. I mean I figured if Ryu had like an immortality curse or whatever and he'd been sexing up other women, that they would have to have some side affect as well. So it's good to address that. Though I kind of figured the surprise was going to be a pregnancy or something. I guess it's just that Ryu is like passing along the immortality to women he's in love with.

Definitely can't wait to find out what Bayonetta's plan is. Bayonetta/Ryu rocks.
person mog
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I didn’t expect an Outlaw Volleyball cameo but that little experiment was pure genius since it paved the way for possibly a mind-blowing orgy with the other women Ryu has been with.

Will the bonds of friendship for Ryu, Eliott, Jann Lee, and Hayate be strengthened through sharing as Hitomi and Leifang put it in Ch. 46? I guess we’ll just have to wait and see.

Sir, I look forward to your next amazing chapter. Keep on trucking.
person TVO
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 51

This was a good little chapter. It was great to see since there hadn't been an update for a while. I'm glad that Tina and Ryu have become much closer rather than the just friends with benefit agreement they had at first. I also definitely like Hayate having a relationship with Lisa as well. And the four play was hot.

Please update with Chapter 53 soon. Can't wait to see what Bayonetta has in mind for Ryu.
person Em7Phones
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And just when I thought that you'd finally given up on this wonderful project of yours, another great chapter is added.

The ninja roses arc has been going on for alot longer than any of the others so far. I'm very interested in seeing whether you'll continue it or begin with another arc, presumably featuring bayonetta?
schedule May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And the man has resurfaced. Impressive. Painfully short this time but alas Tina has fall in with Ryu. Looks like Ryu will have to add anther female to his harem. Not bad I say fr the super modern ninja. Both Lisa and Tina got to be with powerful ninjas. What more could they ask for?
person scalon
schedule May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And thus the matching pair thing is done again:P

First Jann Lee and Eliot find out about LeiFang and Hitomi, and now Hayate and Ryu find out about Tina and Lisa:P

Each ninja ends up showing a deeper emotion with his "chosen Hinamoto": Hayate with Fujiko (and the lust both pulsed) and Ryu with Reiko (with a lot of love that Ryu kept thanking the Heavens for giving him a second chance to "love Kureha").

Then while each ninja pounds his "ring girl" the gals express their love for each other. One almost wonders whether Tina and Lisa might end up with a baby ninja or two after all this is said and done:P

Would we end up with a "science duel in stereo" as Lisa confronts her twin sister, Anesthesia? Or possibly Ryu using sex to turn Lady X into sexual scrap (or that might be Hayate)?

And of course, afterwards, might Reiko and Fujiko be in matching "naughty nurse" outfits to tend to their ninja men? Oh, the possibilities for "fetish fuel" with them as full-service attendants:P

(Sorry, tripped out on the Tv Tropes website too long:P)