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At long last light meets darkness as Lisa confronts Anesthesia. And we see the puppet mistress...had strings atop her as well as Elizabet warped Anesthesia well enough to carry out her bidding. Of course, that means...if Elizabet finds out her puppet her her strings cut at last...then the fireworks could fly good:P

And of course, the question of Ryu's immortality remains...is his son with Helena (and possibly Taki as well) going to be outlived by him after Anesthesia awoke the immortality within, and Bayonetta purged his Fiend part?

And since you said "nine months, maybe ten"...then that begs the question if anybody else is pregnant too (if I remember that right, 9 1/2 months is the usual period between conceiving a baby and delivering one, maybe sooner in case of emergency) or wants to be.

Could that be why Tina went into those Marathon sessions, especially the most recent one? She met a man who was her equal that she loved with her heart and mind, body and soul, and that put some pangs in her womb? And might Rachel or Ayane have done that already (or Kasumi one more time)?

Nine months before they all return...and maybe with bundles of joy for Ryu?:P

Though the girls before Ryu entered the Rumble Roses--had they gotten immortality then, or will they need to get it now?

And in that chamber for 9 or 10 months with Tina and Ryu...that's going to be a LOT of data for baseline, and Tina is a LOT more responsive than Lady X was. Though, with Tina more in control thanks to having the immortality, she won't need to worry about losing her mind like she had on the island (Lisa didn't come get them for over a week, and Ryu and Tina were reduced to two beings driven with primal urges).

This was definitely worth the long wait, and I can see why you waited so long. This was yin and yang, light and dark. Twins no doubt working the wickedest of fantasies--it makes you wonder if Anesthesia might ask Hayate to take her for her "atonement" just as earlier, Lisa had done so for hers after Hayate first came back to himself (and found out he had a new niece as well).

Although the idea of Lisa, Fujiko and Anesthesia with Hayate...almost like Tina, Rachel and Dixie...joining with Kasumi, Ayane and Reiko with Ryu. Now that the ninjas' "swords" are ready, how well can they cut through the sexual tension?:P

Of course, with all that time in the chamber, they'll need breaks:P

Food, water, sleep, bathing, checking in with reality as well (if you've been MIA for 9-10 months, people would get concerned if you didn't raise your head to say where you were:P). And of course, possibly more duty with the Rumble Roses Tournament and the Dead or Alive Tournament too--the two most prominent faces with each are going to need to do the usual public relations tours for each:)

And of course, might Bass ask if Ryu is going to honor his daughter if she tells Ryu "Darling, we might want to welcome a little one into our lives soon..." Hey, with all the primal lust going on, it brings to mind the old dirty joke:

What do you call a girl who uses the rhythm method?
Mommy!

All that might need Leifang to brew a LOT of her special tea for Tina--and the blonde would need to make sure the ingredients were handy:P

And then folks wonder how public Tina would be with Ryu if they talk that they do more than manager-fighter stuff...this is a rich work that was well worth the wait.

Yeah! Go Ryu. Loved it.

This was a good chapter. Thanks so much. I would've liked for Ryu to have been more involved but oh well. Updates are a little slow but thanks for this one and I hope we see the next chapter soon. Can't wait to see what happens next now that Anesthesia has been caught. Will she be reformed at all? I wonder. I also wonder if we will find out who is having Ryu's next child. I can only assume it is Rachel. Please update soon.

nice job on Helena/Spencer part. cant wait to see what happens next. well i do have one request including Ayane/Niki or Ayane/Noble rose they both have same colored hair i think. would be interesting how they meet. keep up the good work.

We got to be careful not to turn Ryu into a super-ninja version of "Chef" from "South Park"--"Dang, woman! I just made sweet, sweet ninja loving to you 4 seconds ago! What are you trying to do, kill me?:P"

It reminds me of the old Remington shaver commercial done by the late Victor Kiam "I liked it so much, I bought the company!" Indeed, taking the Rumble Roses public was the best way to quiet all discontent from the higher-ups. It didn't hurt Helena that a few of "her people" (Tina, Lisa, Ryu, Lei-Fang, Hitomi and Hayate) pumped up the Rumble Roses' value; it was argued that since they originally were part of the Dead or Alive Tournament, the fighters' contributions should factor into the negotiations. It was interesting that Miss Spencer pretty much became a giddy fangirl/groupie with Helena. And Helena found a sweetness in Muriel that was just as endearing.

Then along comes Tina with the news (to paraphrase Elton John) that "The bitch is 'bagged'.":P

Of course, who loaned Helena the cash?

Had Tina and Lisa gotten Bass to part with a nice chunk, saying it's an investment in what might be a "family business"?

Possibly Niki convinced Zack that helping Ryu might help New Zack Island, especially if they use the Island to hold both DOA and Rumble Roses events? Zack, once Tina spills the details, might think, "This might help me get in good with the big boss lady. And since Ryu made this big, I might owe him for what Eliot gave 'us' earlier. And getting in good with DOATEC and these Rumble Roses might make us all winners as well."

And of course, Tina and Lisa had nice nest eggs to make the "hostile takeover omlette" with, and Lisa might have had a few "friends" who might be convinced the "book value" of the "Rumble Roses" was justification for major investment. You wonder if the other Roses, especially Aisha with her own media resources, might have wanted a taste of the omlette if they "had the right ingredients" as well (Muriel, of course, was the legal department the girls used, so she got the heat ready to cook:P).

Also...how well funded is the Mugen Tenshin Clan? Might Kasumi and Ayane have seen Hayate and Ryu perform, and that used to convince the keepers of the ninja purse-strings to stake Helena's bid?

Or how well did Lisa do with the others of the DOA tourney? Could she convince them to jump in on Helena's bid before things went too far south?

That's wild, I know, but when it comes to the brass tacks, people are gonna wanna know how many of the DOA folks decided Helena might have a golden goose sighted for capture, hoping the golden eggs haven't run out

AWESOME! Hot lesbian action. When will Ryu get some more action? He deserves it!

Ryu's rejuvenating, immortality-bestowing seed healed Reiko's injury, so it bears to wonder...if Christie is barren, might a few shots of the new Bayonetta-boosted seed work to revitalize/restore the assassin's reproductive system so she too might want deep down to have his baby (her time with Helena's little boy might do something with this too:P)?

This remains a wonderful thing. Great job.