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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow..this last chapter would have been amazing if you didn't write the scene at the ending about christie banging leon and bayman, that just completly sucked all the fun out of this chapter (Chapter 58), dude seriously if you have time please change it...
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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn
Why the heck did you have to write that crappy scene at the end with christie leon and bayman
that just completly F'ed up this entire chapter
Please for the love of god change it...
Why the heck did you have to write that crappy scene at the end with christie leon and bayman
that just completly F'ed up this entire chapter
Please for the love of god change it...
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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay Another great chapter to this literary gold of a lemon story
just one thing it would be awesome if you changed the ending of chapter 58 me and most of my online friends that use this site didn't really enjoy reading the last part that featured christie and those two dudes
i know you didn't really write a lemon for christie and bayman and leon but just mentioning kind of messes up the flow of this chapter since i really only read this story for lemons that feature ryu and even mentioning about other guys getting some sort of messes up the flow of this story
if i ignore that this is definatly one of your better chapters
just one thing it would be awesome if you changed the ending of chapter 58 me and most of my online friends that use this site didn't really enjoy reading the last part that featured christie and those two dudes
i know you didn't really write a lemon for christie and bayman and leon but just mentioning kind of messes up the flow of this chapter since i really only read this story for lemons that feature ryu and even mentioning about other guys getting some sort of messes up the flow of this story
if i ignore that this is definatly one of your better chapters
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August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Love it!
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Tycho writes some of the most and most fun and erotic stories. The problem? The wait between his chapters of his serialized stories gets really frustrating and annoying at times. I love this story but the updates are freaking ridiculous.
All that being said this chapter really delivered. The Rumble exhibition was freaking crazy.
Some criticisms: I thought Tina and Ryu doing a calibration test of his stamina for TEN MONTHS is sort of ridiculous. So basically they were having sex with each other for a year. I get that Ryu's new abilities basically make him immortal and give him infinite vitality, but can he still be hurt, killed, or wounded in battle? Why doesn't Lisa figure that out? Also, I mean Ryu is basically mated with Kasumi and Ayane and I get he's a ninja and all but I don't buy that he would stay away from his family and loved ones for that long.
I get that these are all women Ryu had experience with before, but the implication previously was that Ryu was only able to pass on his immortal essence to women he had a deep emotional bond or loving connection with. I didn't get that with a lot of the characters here in the erotic rumble being "deserving" of that.
I thought the reunion between Ryu and Rachel was fun with the pretty obvious conclusion that Rachel had Ryu's kid. But I mean what is the kid's name and where is he? I wouldn't have minded Rachel talking more about her explanation on why she tricked Ryu. I mean why did she want to have his kid, and if she wanted his son, why didn't she just tell him? I doubt Ryu would've refused impregnating her.
So what happens with Tina and Ryu? Will she join the Ryu harem and have a family with him as well?
I mean look the story is so much fun and it sometimes is a nice excuse for Ryu to have sex with a lot of hot women, but I found this chapter a little too over the top at times. I was really happy to get this update, but I think I just would've liked a little more story, development, and justification of details here. Tycho doesn't really offer his author commentary and he comes off a little reclusive at times.
Regardless, please keep up the great work and I hope you update this and the Tomb Raider/Duke Nukem story again sooner rather than later.
All that being said this chapter really delivered. The Rumble exhibition was freaking crazy.
Some criticisms: I thought Tina and Ryu doing a calibration test of his stamina for TEN MONTHS is sort of ridiculous. So basically they were having sex with each other for a year. I get that Ryu's new abilities basically make him immortal and give him infinite vitality, but can he still be hurt, killed, or wounded in battle? Why doesn't Lisa figure that out? Also, I mean Ryu is basically mated with Kasumi and Ayane and I get he's a ninja and all but I don't buy that he would stay away from his family and loved ones for that long.
I get that these are all women Ryu had experience with before, but the implication previously was that Ryu was only able to pass on his immortal essence to women he had a deep emotional bond or loving connection with. I didn't get that with a lot of the characters here in the erotic rumble being "deserving" of that.
I thought the reunion between Ryu and Rachel was fun with the pretty obvious conclusion that Rachel had Ryu's kid. But I mean what is the kid's name and where is he? I wouldn't have minded Rachel talking more about her explanation on why she tricked Ryu. I mean why did she want to have his kid, and if she wanted his son, why didn't she just tell him? I doubt Ryu would've refused impregnating her.
So what happens with Tina and Ryu? Will she join the Ryu harem and have a family with him as well?
I mean look the story is so much fun and it sometimes is a nice excuse for Ryu to have sex with a lot of hot women, but I found this chapter a little too over the top at times. I was really happy to get this update, but I think I just would've liked a little more story, development, and justification of details here. Tycho doesn't really offer his author commentary and he comes off a little reclusive at times.
Regardless, please keep up the great work and I hope you update this and the Tomb Raider/Duke Nukem story again sooner rather than later.
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July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its not often that the amount of time without an update is directly proportional to the quality of the next chapter, and this one was far greater than I could have imagined.
Seeing as everything has come full circle in this chapter, it seems appropriate to tell you in this review that your work was stellar since chapter 1, and has only gotten better since. There really is no amount of superlatives and praise to do this series justice.
Clearly, you don't intend for this to end quite yet, and I can only anticipate the next chapter just as I have all the others before it.
Seeing as everything has come full circle in this chapter, it seems appropriate to tell you in this review that your work was stellar since chapter 1, and has only gotten better since. There really is no amount of superlatives and praise to do this series justice.
Clearly, you don't intend for this to end quite yet, and I can only anticipate the next chapter just as I have all the others before it.
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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! GO RYU! DOMINATE THEM BITCHES! LOL!
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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So at long last we have the major-league Hardcore-Pay-Per-Voyeristic-View event of the century. Beautiful and well worth it.
We at last see that with Tina telling Bass about Ryu, he finally gives his approval. It was important for him to know who he'd be needing to bring into the family fold, so to speak. Or who might be his "son-in-law," as Ryu would always do his kids honor, even if no rings were needed.
Then comes the long stream of women that rivals the "Time Trial" chapter. With no Alpha to intrude. With each shot of Dragon Essence, they get healed and revitalized. It was interesting that Lisa told Ryu not to hold back with her and Fujiko as "Hayate would know if he had" (and felt they hadn't gotten the full effects the others did).
After the sister act of Anesthesia and Lisa, Aisha makes Ryu 3-for-3 with the "sistas." The ladies went to Japan hunting for dragon...and Ryu delivered in all the right ways.
Of course, then Leifang, Makoto, Hitomi and Aigle gets their fair share of Ryu, the "gift that keeps giving life" to them all :)
The Hinamoto sisters got their rightful due of Dragon Essence--and once again, Hayate would know Ryu didn't hold back (Fujiko wouldn't have let Ryu :P), but be the better Ryu hadn't :) (I see a "sandwich" in Hayate's menu coming soon:P)
And Rachel soon tells Ryu "You're a father to a little boy." Meaning she's joined Kasumi and Helena in the "Inner Circle" of select ladies who'd make sure there would be an heir to the Ninja Dragon.
And last but definitely not least for Ryu are Ayane and Kasumi, who get their rightful reward in all suits, not just spades.
But with twenty nubile women healed up and ready to take on each other, folks might turn off the event before the event shuts down (the ladies and Ryu might not need sleep, but the viewers do). Either that or someone is recording this into a multi-part edition for distribution. I think we're talking at least 8 discs per box set, or at least 3 hours as the ladies all turn the Rumble Royale into a female frenzy when they're not seeing how much Ryu can further pump inside them :)
We at last see that with Tina telling Bass about Ryu, he finally gives his approval. It was important for him to know who he'd be needing to bring into the family fold, so to speak. Or who might be his "son-in-law," as Ryu would always do his kids honor, even if no rings were needed.
Then comes the long stream of women that rivals the "Time Trial" chapter. With no Alpha to intrude. With each shot of Dragon Essence, they get healed and revitalized. It was interesting that Lisa told Ryu not to hold back with her and Fujiko as "Hayate would know if he had" (and felt they hadn't gotten the full effects the others did).
After the sister act of Anesthesia and Lisa, Aisha makes Ryu 3-for-3 with the "sistas." The ladies went to Japan hunting for dragon...and Ryu delivered in all the right ways.
Of course, then Leifang, Makoto, Hitomi and Aigle gets their fair share of Ryu, the "gift that keeps giving life" to them all :)
The Hinamoto sisters got their rightful due of Dragon Essence--and once again, Hayate would know Ryu didn't hold back (Fujiko wouldn't have let Ryu :P), but be the better Ryu hadn't :) (I see a "sandwich" in Hayate's menu coming soon:P)
And Rachel soon tells Ryu "You're a father to a little boy." Meaning she's joined Kasumi and Helena in the "Inner Circle" of select ladies who'd make sure there would be an heir to the Ninja Dragon.
And last but definitely not least for Ryu are Ayane and Kasumi, who get their rightful reward in all suits, not just spades.
But with twenty nubile women healed up and ready to take on each other, folks might turn off the event before the event shuts down (the ladies and Ryu might not need sleep, but the viewers do). Either that or someone is recording this into a multi-part edition for distribution. I think we're talking at least 8 discs per box set, or at least 3 hours as the ladies all turn the Rumble Royale into a female frenzy when they're not seeing how much Ryu can further pump inside them :)
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was reading Ice-T's autobiography, "Ice" and he mentioned there were 3 types of women:
1) freak/party girl
2) hustler/money-maker
3) wife/mother
Either he would get one woman who was all three...or three women who each specialized in one of them.
All the girls were obviously Type 1, while Kasumi was also Type 3. If "money-maker" equals businesswoman, then Tina Armstrong is also a type 2, and Helena is all three (she enjoys sex with Ryu, she is the big business head of DOATEC and the Rumble Roses organizations, and she sired Ryu's child).
I don't know if Ayane or Rachel would be Type 3, even though they love Ryu dearly, or if Tina is having too good a time to think of using her dragon-essence-boosted body to become a Mom and give Bass grandkids. It would make Tina a target of those who want payback for Donavon or just see her as Ryu's blonde American bitch--she IS his biggest booster, and his manager, so some might put a bullseye on a few parts of her.
Ryu would be wise to make sure she's well-covered since she's ptobably the point-woman for Helena and Ryu too.
1) freak/party girl
2) hustler/money-maker
3) wife/mother
Either he would get one woman who was all three...or three women who each specialized in one of them.
All the girls were obviously Type 1, while Kasumi was also Type 3. If "money-maker" equals businesswoman, then Tina Armstrong is also a type 2, and Helena is all three (she enjoys sex with Ryu, she is the big business head of DOATEC and the Rumble Roses organizations, and she sired Ryu's child).
I don't know if Ayane or Rachel would be Type 3, even though they love Ryu dearly, or if Tina is having too good a time to think of using her dragon-essence-boosted body to become a Mom and give Bass grandkids. It would make Tina a target of those who want payback for Donavon or just see her as Ryu's blonde American bitch--she IS his biggest booster, and his manager, so some might put a bullseye on a few parts of her.
Ryu would be wise to make sure she's well-covered since she's ptobably the point-woman for Helena and Ryu too.
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April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
These screens from DOA Dimensions made me read chapter 19 again (substituting Hayabusa for Hayate)
http://gamersyde.com/pop_images_dead_or_alive_dimensions-15369-19.html
http://gamersyde.com/pop_images_dead_or_alive_dimensions-15369-20.html
http://gamersyde.com/pop_images_dead_or_alive_dimensions-15369-21.html
LOL I'm really seeing the Eliot x Ayane possibilities. If Ryu going to revisit his feelings for Hitomi in carnal fashion, seems only fair for Eliot to explore certain things with Ayane.
Great job on this epic fic and looking forward to more chapters!
http://gamersyde.com/pop_images_dead_or_alive_dimensions-15369-19.html
http://gamersyde.com/pop_images_dead_or_alive_dimensions-15369-20.html
http://gamersyde.com/pop_images_dead_or_alive_dimensions-15369-21.html
LOL I'm really seeing the Eliot x Ayane possibilities. If Ryu going to revisit his feelings for Hitomi in carnal fashion, seems only fair for Eliot to explore certain things with Ayane.
Great job on this epic fic and looking forward to more chapters!