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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You might consider it your duty to write an ever-so-needed KH het fic (there are plenty out there), but even the sub-par yaoi writers can mop the floor with your story.
Brush up on your skills before acting arrogant.
Brush up on your skills before acting arrogant.
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was really childish of you to say that, you might have gotten away with just saying it at the beginning of your story but not in the description, it makes you a fool.
If you did notice someone wrote a M/M/F (even if it was a marysue)...anyway what we really need more of is N/C dammit!!! haha(I'm not joking!)
You didn't put anything about it being a crossover(sorta I know) but you still should say it...and where they are from.
The plot is...lacking something...needs more description.
Some of your words are not capatilized when they should be.
Have fun improving your story and yourself!
If you did notice someone wrote a M/M/F (even if it was a marysue)...anyway what we really need more of is N/C dammit!!! haha(I'm not joking!)
You didn't put anything about it being a crossover(sorta I know) but you still should say it...and where they are from.
The plot is...lacking something...needs more description.
Some of your words are not capatilized when they should be.
Have fun improving your story and yourself!