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for Hidden Beauty

by WotanAnubis

schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is perhaps of my favorite, under appreciated pairing in the Fire Emblem fandom, and I'm just happy to find a yuri fic that did them a sort of justice. A nice, quick piece of smutty fluff, which is very appropriate for Calill and Nephenee's relationship. Nice;y written work all around, particularly on the descriptions of Nephenee's naked body, and her line to Calill about impressing her.
person BookaG
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've realized that you're quite the prolific one; your name is all over this place. I'm very impressed that you can crank out story after story without them seeming thinly spread. Of course you used a great pairing here and did a fine job with it.
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wotan, you're my hero. this is the fic that brought me to AFF.
person Sara Jaye, not logged in
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You, sir or madam, are one hell of a writer, y'know that?
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quick and tender. And to the point.

The writing is solid, and I enjoyed the descriptions. I haven’t gotten very far in this game, so I can’t say if this pair is in character or not. This isn’t the kind of fic to dote on character development anyway, it works as a solid framework for the titillating sex. I’m going to make an effort to read your other stories, hopefully after I’ve beaten the games.
person Doberfuhr
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff -- nice to finally see a good Fire Emblem fic. Would love to see more of the same.
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice, you are really into fire emblem eh? Well I just got the game for my camecube, and have been playing it off and on for a few weeks. The stratagy is cool, and the AI are bastards, always going for wounded and defenseless units. Some how I always manage to have Boyd killed before the midway point,(Ike becomes a lord) not intentionaly either, but I get tired of reseting and go aw fuck it. Anyways, for the fic here, nice format, nice idea, hot girl on girl action. Overall I give it an 9 out of 10. Well, good luck, and godspeed. Ivan out....