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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! It's a really interesting story. I'm hooked on it. I check everday to see if has been updated. Sora is so cute. I love their personalities in the story especially big brother Cloud!!
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XP Wow >> Rikku's such a manipulative girl
>:3 Poor poor Cloud (XP The hell he is) ^^ Great chappie update soon! ><^
>:3 Poor poor Cloud (XP The hell he is) ^^ Great chappie update soon! ><^
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Yay! I love the way you had Rikku and Cloud as Sora's siblings ^^ Very creative and it works out ('cept for the blonde hair, but it happens in r/l) So, keep up the great work! And please update soon =D
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>> Damn Kairi's a bitch ><
FUCK HER you know normally I dun mind Kai that much but >> If she ever did that to Sora in the plot I'd with for her to get stabbed by the keyblade over and over again.
And then stabed some more! >> Maybe by Way to the Dawn or something..yeah....*smirk* >> *cough* Anyveys...
^^ Goood story veery good >> And I must read more so I demnad you write more!! ><^ >> When you have time that is. *chibi eyes* Onegai!?
>> Maybe Leon should make an appearance too >:3 LeonxCloudxSephi drama!!
T^T I love RikuxSora >> :3 The only thing more obvious is AxelxRoxas
>> Um ranting now so on a closing note: CONTINUE!!!! >w<^
FUCK HER you know normally I dun mind Kai that much but >> If she ever did that to Sora in the plot I'd with for her to get stabbed by the keyblade over and over again.
And then stabed some more! >> Maybe by Way to the Dawn or something..yeah....*smirk* >> *cough* Anyveys...
^^ Goood story veery good >> And I must read more so I demnad you write more!! ><^ >> When you have time that is. *chibi eyes* Onegai!?
>> Maybe Leon should make an appearance too >:3 LeonxCloudxSephi drama!!
T^T I love RikuxSora >> :3 The only thing more obvious is AxelxRoxas
>> Um ranting now so on a closing note: CONTINUE!!!! >w<^
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was a little confusing in the beginning, what with the bold and non-bold and such, but I do so enjoy your story, keep updating, I can't wait to find out what Rikku's plan is.
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Axel is like my upmost favorite right up there with Riku so I really like this! I'm going to have to keep an eye out for it now. It is an interesting take on the whole Sora/Riku angle and I am enjoying how you are relating everyone. Keep it up! and update soon!
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much on fanfiction.net and I hope and it be soo awesome if you are posting a sexier version on adultfanfiction.net! Oh yeah I hope your next update on fanfiction.net is soon and has zexion/Demyx! XD
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I LOVE this story! I was wondering if you would bring it here! I hope you plan to update though cause I'm dying to know what will happen next! Keep up the great work! This story rocks!
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn Kairi's such a bitch. And I love it. Though I'm a little confused about what happened. Sora cheated on Riku, I get that, but with who? Kairi?
Great start, keep it up.
Great start, keep it up.
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I get it now! Damn. Kairi is a frickin bitch. I want to slap the taste out of her mouth for her deeds. I really hope Sora can forgive Riku. Oh. And that little parargraph during Riku's POV? Turned me on. You should have written more.
Can't wait to see what happens next. Update ASAP!
Can't wait to see what happens next. Update ASAP!