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for Super Smash Bros Brawl - Newcomers

by Streti

person Big Boss
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic that was the best story iv'e read on this I couldn't stop laughing from start to end. The jokes about metal gear are brillant. If you decide to do another story with snake I have an idea how about old snake trying to get some. Plenty of c omedic jokes about snakes wrinkly old snake would be very funny.
person anonymous
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'll give you a review just based on the "Hit the weak point for MASSIVE DAMAGE" you threw in there. /b/ much? on a serious note, I love your storys, I hope someday that you finish "Nector from Eden" (note completely sure on that title, been some time since I read it.