rate_review Reviews

CRAB BATTLE! YESS!!! XD
Pure awesomeness, my friend, pure awesomeness!
...A BARREL ROLE?!? WTF??! LMFAO!!!

DO A BARREL ROLL!

That was awesome but I want to see some Bowser/Zelda sex please or better yet Ike/Zelda/Link

I nearly died laughing. WTF, dude?! XD

Entertainment value very good, but... what on earth were you smoking?

When I saw the pairing, I was thinking, "Wow, someone capitalized on this already?" I've read your work before, so I was looking forward to a nice, steamy pairing between two hot characters. When I read it through, though, I was a bit distracted by the sheer amount of humor you threw in. It seems like halfway through, you decided that it'd be better off as a parody, and I must say that the resulting package was pretty goofy, but brilliant.

All the references to MGS and Metroid were great, and the way you explained some of the sexual interactions were nothing short of hilarious. It's like you took the "by the book" approach to writing erotic fanfiction, but you were still under the high of some Mary Jane or something.

'...and we wouldn't want to neglect her ass, would we?'

Paraphrased, but great nonetheless.

-jm

Thanks for your comments, everyone, especially MCLBaAAPSADFF. Funny idea, Big Boss.

It seems that I currently have interest only in these PWP fics of mine. This story especially has little in the way of background, because the setting is from a game that hasn't been released, in a fic geared towards humor. Also, I'm less familiar with Metroid than MGS, which shows in Samus' lesser role, not to mention that Metroid has less exposition overall.

And hey, Anonymous: /v - is it /b with video games? Nectar from Eden has taken a backseat since my interest in FF8 has dwindled, but I have not forgotten about it.

That was insane. In a good way. Thanks for writing. :)

...could smell the masculine, sexy smell of smoke from his cigarette? wow, that sounds like something out of the fourties/fifties,
like what's this? why Mr. Authorperson you're not smoking a smooth and relaxing cigarette at all?

you fail to bring a real backstory/background into the story, but i can't blame you seing that the super smash games doesn't really have a story... oh well

you manage to put in a couple of references from MGS and that's good(most people doesn't know about Otacon's relationship with his mother)
you've got a talent but you should try to make a plot instead of writing a meaningless PWP(in my opinion), and you could try to make the characters a little more into character

all in all i give this story a strong 3 out of 5, Keep up the good work :)

This wins. Flawless victory.