rate_review Reviews

Wow. Even better than the first installment. I love this so much. So much in fact, I think I may have to draw fan art for it, if I can find the time. In which case, I'll be sure you are the first to see it.

Can't wait to read the next lot of chapters. x

Bad Saatchi, bad!! >:o I feel almost sorry for Midg-- I mean Xiaoyu. -_-;

But, congratulations on part two finished! :D http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/48701171/ A little something. ^^ Keep up the marvelous work~ :D

Oh, one thing that has been bugging me for a while now in your story is the confusion of some words. Mostly the use of "your" and "you're", and also the difference between "wet" and "whet". I think you should pay more attention to those word pairs. Here's a link to a site that has a lot of commonly misused words: http://www.readabilityformulas.com/article-lanne.html

But this is just minor detailing, don't let it keep you from writing. ^^

Thank you for the review, Selfie. I appreciate a good critic!! In defense, let me say that when the average person speaks, which is the predominant use of "your" versus "you're", there is never a break down of proper grammer. And if anything, while writing Hwoarang, good grammer isn't even a factor hehehe, though I do understand the need for that conjunction change. There is a difference, however, between "wet" and"whet". "Whet" is used to indicate when something is...unnaturally whet...for example, lubrication, although it is "wet" on the skin, I like to differentiate it with by adding the extra "h". So, that is a bit of artistic loveliness on my part.

Thank you for the link, I will definately give it a read over!!

Bi-weekly?! Ahh, that seems like such a long time. x3 I'm so so very glad to have rediscovered this story arc of yours. (I began reading the first part in... oh dear, I can't even remember when. o_O When did you begin writing it? XD; And then a few months ago I get back to fandom, start reading fics and suddenly get this "Hey. I've read this before. O_o"-feeling~) It seems to me that your writing skills have only gotten better through time. This part seems to have advanced on every level for you, keep it up~ :D

Thank you so much for writing this arc, I love it!

I just want to say thank you so much for writing this fic. <3 I realize you're writing this somewhat simultaneously with "The Quality of the Sword" (or are you?), but somehow this story is much more eloquently written, I love it! The way you describe various settings and objects (and smut, yes XD) is just wonderful. And you seem to have such good grip on character personas too, this story seems very realistic. (Well, as realistic as a fanfiction from a fictional game can get :3) I'm always eagerly waiting for the next chapter. ^^

I hope everyone enjoys. I have actually completed this sequel...chapters I will post will be weekly till it is here in its entirety. I have begun work on my T5 fic, the last in the "Sword Maker Trilogy", please R&R!

I love this story arc and the way it is progressing. I check back every other-to-once a day to see if you keep updating and you have! Please continue.

Yay! An update. I was worried you had died or something. Good stuff.

I can't believe I'm reading this. It's like a dream. A really really good dream. It's so detailed...and...god damn just perfect.