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January 14, 2021 at 12:00 AM
There are VERY few good sex stories with actual plot in my opinion and this one is one of the good ones I hope it continues and if not will be sad to see it end
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May 30, 2018 at 12:00 AM
I don’t write a review on this website often but this story actually was very good it had plot. The hk and toydarian parts in chapter 5 was funny
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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, that was a plesant read. I know what you mean about the distressing lack of reviews in this section... the problem is, there aren't as many KOTOR geeks as there are other types... we're a smaller group. But you have beautifully written sex scenes, maybe a little unbelievable in places, but perfectly enjoyable that way. And I even enjoyed the not-sex scenes.
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did a very good impression of an annoying sports annoncer at the end of chap 3. Not bad, you gonna do more?
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You want it, you got it. Check out "Choose Your Path", on this site same section.
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would enjoy seeing more fics similar to this.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I greatly enjoyed your fic, and would much love to see a KOTOR 1 version of it. Please, for the sake of all that is good in the world, continue! ^_^
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for all the reviews, guys. I just wish there were a bit more. I have to have a reason for deviating from my normal writings and finishing these stories for you guys. The only other multi-chapter KOTOR fic has 33 reviews but only two chapters, mine has 5 long chapters and only 13 reviews. Although Big D's has been around longer (and honestly, is better), this story has been around for a long time and there's just not enough reviews. One a week would keep me more than happy.
And tell me what you like and don't like, I love constructive criticism.
And tell me what you like and don't like, I love constructive criticism.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Simple, terse and brief: Very well-written fic, full of eroticism and description, yet with an interesting story thrown in there as well. Doesn't get any better than that, pure awesomeness.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have just read the whole thing. It´s great. Quite a surprise what happened to Mission but I do like it, and I would love to see her on board of the ebon hawk as the journey goes on. Please continue this great work.