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for Not Real, Really

by Breech_Loader

schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*SPOILER*

Tails as a stripper/prostitute? Fucking WIN!!! Pretty hot too =D
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey make more please i thought it was cream but tails damn good story
person japperon
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
continue this seems like a good fic. it has depth and background.
person Draz
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harley. Amazing Piece I would love to see you write a nice evil piece on Cream, or maybe more Tails rape? Keepsup.
person TJC Martin
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. A Great peice, I love the huge twist at the end, First time ive encounterd a subversive Yaoi.

I thought the fic was ecellent, it really left me feeling sorry for Tails. I know you only intended it as a one shot, but It's be great to read more.

You are a great writer, the best of luck with any other works.

person N/A
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm back. I agree with Sybo, you ARE fucking nuts. However, anybody intelligent is insane. And geniuses even more so, just look at Einstein.

Basically I'm just here to say that, after reading this again, it deserves to be continued.
person Sybo
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you're fucking nuts.

That is all.
person Miss. Anonymous
schedule May 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seems like a very intresting story. I understand it was a one-shot but it didn't feel that way, it was to good. Please by all means continue.
person sonic232
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. A very interesting look at a very strange profession that Tails takes. With Rouge as his boss. Its written very well, I must admit. And it does inspire emotions of pity for Tails. As to WHY he chose to be a male prostitute for Rouge, I don't really think I'd like to know. Please R&R "The Chaos Within." Please.
person N/A
schedule May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, at first I thought Cream or Amy, but as soon as I read the bit about 'you better not sell him too cheap', I thought it might be tails. I still wasn't sure though. Nice work, it has potential as a story, and I wouldn't mind seeing it go on, revealing a dark side of Tails is a too-unexplored idea from what I've seen.

Of course, it has a fair smattering of typoes, but nothing a good proofread wouldn't sort out, and after all, all genius is flawed, right?