rate_review Reviews

oooohh....interesting...

These are pretty long chapters so I'll read and review as I read. This was incredibly funny. Selphie was excellent, as well as your Riku. Kairi seems to be different then in your other story, though in any case, she's rather likable here. You describe everything very well and the story moves at a good pace so that you can take everything in.

So for, it's excellent.

hey! this is actually really cool! poor sora...ha! Kairi has the keyblade, thats o cool! never even thought about that!

I reeaaaally like this story so far. I can actually put up with Kairi in your story. But RikuxSora is still my favorite pairing. Sora seems so naive and oblivious to what he's doing to Riku is ch. 2, but i dunno, i somehow get the feeling he knows what he's doing. Meh. It's sooooooo good. I'll ALWAYS check back for updates.

OMG, I love it already! I hope Sora conforts Riku in the next chapter, he was so upset! CAn't wait to read more!

Pretty long but overall, a funny! I love the interaction between characters in this chapter. Kairi's less annoying but I'm definately hoping for some Sora/Riku action.

Oh, you have a few grammer errors, but overall, it's okay.
Keep up the great writing!