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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.....that was beautiful......very lyrical....i loved it very very very very much ^__^
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was somehow... Sad. ._____.
Or maybe it's just the fact that I'm listening to a sad song. X'D
Nice, you really have a flowing way of writing.
Really makes one want to keep on reading. X'3
You have to make Sora meet his golden boy. 8D
Or maybe it's just the fact that I'm listening to a sad song. X'D
Nice, you really have a flowing way of writing.
Really makes one want to keep on reading. X'3
You have to make Sora meet his golden boy. 8D
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was actually pretty neat! I like it a lot!
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn XD~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice oneshot ^^
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
While you already know that the personification of the bedding was especially intriguing (and well-executed), I never got to mention my favorite line:
"He wanted to kiss someone the way people in the movies did, full and passionate."
Sora's inexperience, yearning, idealism, impressionability--it's all pretty much epitomized in that one line. If I had to describe this story in one sentence taken from the story itself, I'd use that one.
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"He wanted to kiss someone the way people in the movies did, full and passionate."
Sora's inexperience, yearning, idealism, impressionability--it's all pretty much epitomized in that one line. If I had to describe this story in one sentence taken from the story itself, I'd use that one.
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that was uhh....interesting. I didn't notice any grammar mistakes.
Wish people would make more Sora/Roxas fanfics. *pouts*
Overall: 4.5/5
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Wish people would make more Sora/Roxas fanfics. *pouts*
Overall: 4.5/5
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. ^^ You write the best Sora x BHK fics... and at this point I'm willing to bet they're the only ones out there, but you still write wonderful fics anyway. ^^ Heh... I went to look at the author name when I finished this, recognized your UN, and realized you'd written Fuzzy Love as well... I kinda cheered. lol... anyhow. I hope you update "FL" soon... I'm really looking forward to that story... although this one-shot was nice too. :) Or is it a one-shot? *grins* TTYL!
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing story. I loved this one very much; you made it seem like Sora's "Golden Boy" was actually there with it. It was intense and pasionate. Great work.
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::wouldn't let her log in::
Beautiful...It's all I can say! I love your wording ^__^...
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Beautiful...It's all I can say! I love your wording ^__^...
(This review has been moved from a duplicate version of this story that was posted when AFF was undergoing changes for archiving purposes.)