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person Fire37
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Again I enjoyed it immensely. I pay tribute to this event in my humble attempt at writing a Suikoden lemon, Alpha Prince. Thank you! I want to see more!
person Streti
schedule May 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review, heh. Maybe Retso does feel a little misplaced indeed. After all, he is the third wheel in there. There is a reason for him being there, though, and there's also a lot behind the "promise"... these are left unexplained intentionally. I don't really want to divulge the reasons behind the story, I'll rather leave them for the reader to figure out. I think it's one of the redeeming qualities of this piece. I might continue on the story, indeed, but it's not likely those questions would be answered even then.
person Jace
schedule May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Com'n people! You wanna see more of this, then please review it!
Awesome as always, yet I need to see a continuation!..
Retso was an unexpected participant, which I wasn't very pleased with, but
I guess the "fishy" joke makes up for it... after a few readings he still
feels kinda misplace though. Maybe it would make more sense if you
know what Retso and Logg where up to before meeting with Kisara..
or what her promise to Logg was. It's still hot as hell and I really like the
continuous descriptions and focusing on Kisara's curvy body. Sweet!
"I want more"