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for Beyond the Light

by MomoMochi

person MaddiChan
schedule May 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Overall, this is a nice story. A wee bit odd at times and funny (ZxD) but overall a good story. But I have a feeling that was Riku in the last chapter. Saix did something too him and Roxas probably knows it's not Riku. Poor Sora. And I'm with Roxas: WHERE'S AXEL! lmao!

Update soon!
person Cannibalistic Kitty
schedule May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THis certainly is a unique little story. I'm curious to see what direction it will go in.
person ayarin
schedule May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! Thank you for continuing. :3 I love fairy tales too. Zexion/Demyx is cute. =D Please write more!
person KamirineGoddess
schedule May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Z/D are actually a cute couple. I already like the pairing in your story already to be honest.

::crosses fingers:: But will Axel come try and come to the rescue? (Or is the alt. universe Axel the one from the school?) Actually, is this all the same alt. universe? ( The school, the castle...)
How many alt. universe versions of the characters are there?

In any case, I love the new chapter. You definately added one of my favorite characters to the story so I'm thrilled. But I would love to see Axel come in and shake things up for your Prince Charming Riku.

Oh...and will Ansem show up? (Or was he the principle of that school?)

Update really soon! I have more cookies!
person ayarin
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh. :x I'm curious. I do want to see Riku save Sora. Please? ^^
person kyoishigame
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE DONT STOIP WITH THE STORY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRIGHT A NEW CHAPTER SOON PLEASE
person kyoishigame
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE CONTINUE DONT IGNORE ME AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH lol j/p IF NO ONE REVIEWS>>>WELL I AM SO COULD U CONTINUE THE STORY 4 ME PLEASE CONTINUE
person mikkie
schedule May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
go on T_T theres so lil to read and this story is really interesting.. and I want poor lil cute sora to be happy again T_T ..... its so sad T-T
person KamirineGoddess
schedule May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO! Don't end the story!!! I like it! I like it alot! I feel so bad for Sora and I want to see if Axel and Riku clash or something trying to save him. It's in a interesting twist on the KH universe and I'd like to see what happens next.

Pretty please? ::huggles:: Pretty PRETTY please???!!!! ::Temps you with cookies::