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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"While Riku was figuring out how to approach alternate-universe Sora, regular Sora was wondering why he was wearing a dress."
Kinda took me awhile to keep reading after that quote. I couldn't focus through the giggling. Afterwards, however, I really enjoyed this chapter. Plus, you didn't use Vexen as the crazed sexual predator, like most people do. This makes me happy! ^.^
I shall have to make you cookies....
Kinda took me awhile to keep reading after that quote. I couldn't focus through the giggling. Afterwards, however, I really enjoyed this chapter. Plus, you didn't use Vexen as the crazed sexual predator, like most people do. This makes me happy! ^.^
I shall have to make you cookies....
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Evil.Sexy!Sora is fun! That he is. Of course, I'm glad Riku regained his senses but... This chapter triggered a real debate. Like, is it really possible for someone to cheat *on* Sora *with* Sora? I'll have fun trying to wrap my head around that ieda for awhile....
Oh well, still good! And, yay! Zexion jumped inna the portal too! People sure do that alot...
Oh well, still good! And, yay! Zexion jumped inna the portal too! People sure do that alot...
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sora indeed! *pats his little keybladin' head* You're a vicious, awful person for doing that to him. And thus, I shall throw cookies at you and hug you for your greatness. ^^
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Turns out that it *was* Ch. 7 that held the plea for reviews...
Anywho, Yes! I ntend to find out if Sora's okay, if Axel's alive, and if Riku will succeed! (Why else would I be bothering to review each chapter?)
I particularly liked this quote: "Sora’s Riku had failed them, but maybe his Axel wouldn’t." ...I can't finger the reason, but I loved it, really.
Anywho, Yes! I ntend to find out if Sora's okay, if Axel's alive, and if Riku will succeed! (Why else would I be bothering to review each chapter?)
I particularly liked this quote: "Sora’s Riku had failed them, but maybe his Axel wouldn’t." ...I can't finger the reason, but I loved it, really.
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
With each chapter, this thing gets more addictive. Of course, not -just- because of the pairings *hides her ZexionXDemyx fangirl stuff* but also because it's actually *fun*! Tht's a rarity in stories these days. Mmhmm. It seems the entire fan-authoring world has slipped into an angst ridden depression. So, as a well needed escape, I .... I dunno, i'd be your undying fangirl, but that might be wierd... Yeah...
Oh well. This smiley might explain my mood better than words at the moment. o^.^o
Oh well. This smiley might explain my mood better than words at the moment. o^.^o
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy flag time! *waves the flag madly* That was fun to read! Why, I can just imagine the whole bed of flowers thing in my head, and in my opinion, Riku has every right to be pissy. And of course, Zexion's embodiment of anger makes me giggle! That it does. Plus, Demyx is utterly insane, which just makes life better, really. Have I mentioned lately this is an uber-great story? no? because I should have...
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May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(Phew! The last of my pillar of reviews!)
Oh. Dear. God. If I could even breath through the laughter right now, I'd probably be bouncing around the room like a madwoman! Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Let me just find a cement truck to hold all my fangirly worshipping joy in... If I attempted to hug you so tightly that you popped, would that be bad? I can't be sure. Some people dislike hugs *points to Zexion*
Yours sincerely,
-Kayu
Oh. Dear. God. If I could even breath through the laughter right now, I'd probably be bouncing around the room like a madwoman! Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Let me just find a cement truck to hold all my fangirly worshipping joy in... If I attempted to hug you so tightly that you popped, would that be bad? I can't be sure. Some people dislike hugs *points to Zexion*
Yours sincerely,
-Kayu
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May 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought Saix was the 'other' Riku. Hmm. I *think* I know who he is now but I'll hold it and see if I'm write. If I am, I'll do the Happy Dance. If I'm not...then well, I suck. lmao!
Good chapter, though if they run across Sora and Roxas is still in control and he sees Axel...poor Riku. He'll think Sora...::cries::
Oh! When I said odd, I didn't mean in a bad way, I promise. Just odd as in odd but in a funny way. ^_^* Update ASAP!!
Good chapter, though if they run across Sora and Roxas is still in control and he sees Axel...poor Riku. He'll think Sora...::cries::
Oh! When I said odd, I didn't mean in a bad way, I promise. Just odd as in odd but in a funny way. ^_^* Update ASAP!!
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May 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahh, I just want sora and Riku to be happy, so many things are getting in the way! I guess that's true to KH tho, huh? In the end it always works out somehow right? My little silver sephiroth statue from Japan looks so cute right now so I think I'll go read some seph stories until I can read the next chap of your story. :)
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May 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love you worlds... my friend let me borrow KH and I just finnished it, took me 3 days! Loe your story, hope to see more of it soon.