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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Your story is soooo good. I stayed up all night reading it. I really love your philosophy on how a story show good, no good guys, no bad guys, no ending, just a bunch of vitcims and an ended ending of the unsertenty of life. I love it. THank you very much for writing it, and don't stop writing (not nessisarily it, but in general). I really really really did like it. A lot. Yeah. Okay.
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omigosh! Kairi's gonna die!! >< Leon's gonna kill her...I can't help but say I was delighted to see his concern and how quick he was on the phone, but dang! ^^ And they're all going! Yeah! Cloud's so air headed :P
Irvine and Leon would've been a kawaii couple...but I think I like him fussing over Sora much better. ^^ I'm not mad about the Tifa thing, despite how much I like her, I was actually very tickled. Suited the situation well!
;_; I feel sorry for Yuffie...losing all that materia
Irvine and Leon would've been a kawaii couple...but I think I like him fussing over Sora much better. ^^ I'm not mad about the Tifa thing, despite how much I like her, I was actually very tickled. Suited the situation well!
;_; I feel sorry for Yuffie...losing all that materia
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cringed and shuddered when Ansem rung the doorbell...I could feel the anticipation. T_T Mr. Endo sucks. Stupid homophobe.
I near gushed like crazy when Riku said, "You certainly didn’t have to kiss me.” ^_^ Very sweet
Oooh, poor Sora. But Kairi let her own feelings drive her to this point...
I near gushed like crazy when Riku said, "You certainly didn’t have to kiss me.” ^_^ Very sweet
Oooh, poor Sora. But Kairi let her own feelings drive her to this point...
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again, I just gotta say, I love Namine! Semes are territorial >< I should've just known he'd slam the door or something. Riku's horrible. Bad ass island boy. ^^ I just love the group..they balance eachother out so well..and they're so...bad...it's no other word to explain it. Already climbing the roof and Cloud seemed well verse in saying ,"when the cops come, I had NOTHING to do with this.” Yeah ninja Yuffie!!
Oh God...Leon sat by Riku....
Oh God...Leon sat by Riku....
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I really was intending to review until I got to the last chapter...Which I suppose would've taken a while seeing all the chapters that are here...Man you really know how to keep the fangirl in me happy! I keep getting scared that I end up on a cliffhanger, and bing! Another chapter ^^ I also have to agree with you about Kuja's hips...He the only reason I almost finished FF9... ^^ Neee, I'm so surprised by all the turns of events. And Sora's a very honest person to want to tell Leon and co. everything that happened...I would've kept it to myself. But I understand his reasons. Maaan, I love what you did with Kairi. How you didn't make her totally evil or nothing, just highly misunderstood. ^^ Especially since there original relationship is so close...I was surprised...but that's a good thing, made me love this story more. I like how Riku and Sora don't perfectly get along yet, and how Riku having trouble with his discovery...and Sora's still having trouble letting go of Leon. Makes alot of sense!
Now the real reason I felt I had to review now...I totally heart Namine! She's so pleasantly off! ^^ I love how Riku ended her witchcraft talk with, "I'm starting to see why we don't hang out at school." I like how she can convientantly end most of their fights by being the mediator...and I really love her for having that yaoi manga! Awesome!!
"Sora's giving up and Leon, and Riku's gay!"
Priceless line...
Now the real reason I felt I had to review now...I totally heart Namine! She's so pleasantly off! ^^ I love how Riku ended her witchcraft talk with, "I'm starting to see why we don't hang out at school." I like how she can convientantly end most of their fights by being the mediator...and I really love her for having that yaoi manga! Awesome!!
"Sora's giving up and Leon, and Riku's gay!"
Priceless line...
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wooooooooo! Namine, tear up girl! “No, but I consider him and Sora my friends. I’ve never really had them before. You’ve had them all your life, but what do you do? You tear them apart for your own selfish needs! I might have been a witch in a past life, but you’re a modern day bitch!”
That has to be the most awesome quote I've heard...wow...that line was so powerful. I the fanfiction you've cooked up, she's by far my favorite!
I'm glad Selphie's softening up and everything...also, I'm glad Wakka's realising the big picture some. ^^ Don't kill Kairi...make her suffer, but don't kill her, please.
A love the sweet exchange at the end of the chapter...
That has to be the most awesome quote I've heard...wow...that line was so powerful. I the fanfiction you've cooked up, she's by far my favorite!
I'm glad Selphie's softening up and everything...also, I'm glad Wakka's realising the big picture some. ^^ Don't kill Kairi...make her suffer, but don't kill her, please.
A love the sweet exchange at the end of the chapter...
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg I LOVED THAT STORY, there are no words to express HOW FRIGGEN AWESOME THAT WAS, i even cried*sniffle* YOU NEED TO KEEP WRITING, PLEEEEEASE, TO KEEP ME ALIVE KEEP WRITING DAMMIT 0_0
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you rock. forreal, this story is so amazingly cool. i bet sora really would look cute in a dress. ahha.
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO! You can't stop it now, this thing was all I could think about in boot camp to make the days go by faster, thinking of what will happen, and how everything will go. Pea's continue!
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry. i forgot the whole reason of reviews, the reason they call it reviews, to review the story. i cant criticize, but em, do you have a beta or something? theres a more than a handful of mistakes overall, grammer, puntuation, nothing to complicated. you can still make it out. anyways, the story really did rock. i was in lala land thinking about it for like, i dont know, this whole day during classes? being distracted isnt exactly nice when youre supposed to be working, but eh, i can deal. you rule, again.