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I have to say this is the story I'm most hoping to see a new chapter for whenever I visit this site. I'm a fan of the Prince/Lym relationship and I think you've done an excellent job so far. Their interactions are convincing and very much seem in-character despite the more "adult" situation they're in. I also think you've done well with the other characters, Miakis in particular strikes me as an extension of her in-game self, with a little more raciness obviously.

I admit I would very much like to see the story go towards Prince/Lym in a more "lemon" sense, them consumating their relationship. After the prince is through "courting" her, which strikes me as almost as fun to read about as the end result.

One thing I would very much NOT want to see happen in this story would be for the prince to start banging every woman in the castle - there are several stories already on this site that cover the subject quite well, and frankly I'm tiring of seeing it. The prince does not strike me as the kind of guy to act like that at all. The caring love for his sister which goes a bit beyond what most brothers feel - that is what you've written so far and for me at least, it's right on the money for his personality.

Anyway, here's hoping you post your next chapter soon!

Love chapter3 turning out to be a great story.

Another great chapter. I had been worried at first about how you would handle the Lym and Miakis relationship, but you seem to have handled it pretty well, without it being too tasteless. It's a way for Lymsleia to unwind, and Miakis likes girls anyway, so what's the harm in a little foreplay?

I hope you'll continue even deeper with the Prince and Lym's relationship. The thought that they could actually consider marriage oddly makes me happy - the 108 star ending had had the Prince become the new Commander of the Queen's Knights anyway (though not married to Lym), but what better excuse to bite the bullet and say they're married, though? Given that they're my favorite possible pairing in the game and all.

Good luck with the next chapter! Even with all these other Suikoden V stories here now, this one is still by far my favorite. Don't quit now!

Very good can't wait to see where this goes

Aww...That's almost adorable. Seriously though, great work with the story. Keep it up.

I love it. This should be a continuing series keep them coming.

I love this story it's grade A prime beef, it's a very convincing story as for the incest theme it shouldn't be a problem for people because incest was common in royalty in real life. As for the age thing that also shouldn't be a problem for three reasons.#1 Lym is not real person she's a game character, #2 in real life back in the olden time it was common place for young girls to be married off also in the game Lym got married.#3 Lym is the one that is actively pursuing the relationship. keep up the great work

I enjoyed this story a lot, even though the Princess's age is a little bit uncomfortable. Still, you are a very good writer and I like your style. Just the contrast between your first paragraph and my story's first paragraph... just good writing! Anyway, definitely keep it up. I enjoyed the bit about Miakis. I'd like to see something with Arshtat and I wonder about Lyon?

Not bad. I'm ashamed to say I would have liked it more if it was a bit more racy, but this was definately a classy take on the subject. Personally I'd like to see the prince go through most of the females in the game, or vice-versa. Actually, I think the latter would definately make for a more entertaining read than the former. The fellow really doesn't seem to be the type of guy that'd deliberately go out looking for it.

Please, continue writing the story.

That was great...a little weird that it was incestuous, but interesting none the less.
Ok...I'll admit it!
I really liked it and the fact that incest was involved gives it a forbidden fruit kind of feeling.
Bravo!