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This is a really great story; I hope you write more of it some time. The Prince/Lym pairing is an interesting one that I don't see anyone else writing about, and you write them very well on top of it.

I loved your interaction with Lym and the Prince, it's humorous, explained and steadily developed while remaining rather steamy. Any chance for s Sialeeds/Frey/Lym threesome or one involving Arshtat?

Beautiful story! It's exactly as I would've had it! There's nothing I would really change, except that I would add more. What's best about a fanfiction is to imagine the characters as if it was really them. Try adding more personality to the characters, but less on the Prince. He had hardly any facial expressions and his personality was a bit blank. Miakis was always the silly girl, Lyon is cheerful, and yet serious. Lym? Well, you did pretty good with her. Other than this, it's perfect and I do hope you continue! =3

Neesan

Ah! I'm so glad you finally continued! I had almost given up hope that you would, too, but now I'm happy again (because just about nobody else writes about this pairing, how sad). Plus yours is so good, I can't help but still be hooked on it.

By the way, anonymous reviews are now blocked from this site unless you uncheck the option in your profile; I had to create this account in order to review, which is a bit sad, because most other people won't be able to review your story...

Here's hoping you'll continue again soon!

Hey I miss this story are we ever going to get a new update not that I'm trying to rush you. I just can wait to read more

I really hope you haven't given up on this fic. I keep reading the chapters over and over, and just can't get enough of it! Of course, you should take your time as well, especially if any issues are currently in your way, or even if just life has been busy. It sure has been for me - look how long it took me to finally review this again!

I'd like to see more Prince/Lym lemon-ish smut in the next chapter, but nothing too serious, since I like the idea of him courting her first before going all the way... then again, maybe they just can't wait, either? Who knows?

Looking forward to more! I hope you won't discontinue this, no matter how long it takes for you to write another chapter! It's just getting to the really good part, too!

Update soon please

Hey this Fic is very well written. Also it's very cute and you want their relationship to work out.

Very nice cocept I can't wait to see a update.

Really love the way the story is going so far and it seems very realistic. I can't wait to read a new chapter