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by blackdiamondprincess

person Yakubi
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe... I have read the story that was before this so i know the story line but i was to lazy to review. Sorry~! But the last part was funny. Seeing how Cloud and Leon's room is right next to Sora and Ruki's.... *laugh* Leon and Cloud are not going to get ANY sleep over the whole two week vacation!

Well, i'll try to get out of my lazy streak and review more often. But you are a truely beautiful writer, one of the reasons i didnn't reveiw, i just wanted to get to the next chapter!

Well, thanks for the wonderful story, but I'm going to get some sleep. I read 'Welcome to the wonderful world of purberty' all in one sitting so my eyes really hurt. But when i saw that it had a sequel i did the happy dance in my chair and then went on to reading that. But as I said, i really need some sleep. And so, I bid thee goodnight!

*~Yakubi~*
person Bella
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, i am loving tbis just as much as I LOVED the first one. I have been reading these fanfics and no others since i first discovered them. Thanks so much for putting Sora and Riku, as well as Leon and Cloud back together. I was going to not get any sleep otherwise. lol.
person VII
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
U cant leav it at chappy 9!!! update plz!!

VII
person Blob
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story! Keep up the good work!
person Sekre
schedule June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! Sooo much drama, just when one thing goes right - BAM, something goes wrong! Lovin' it!
person Si
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Leon and CLoud pleeeeease! *starry eyed*

Even though it's AU, this is such a great fic. It always keeps me on the edge of my seat.
person EatMyShorts
schedule June 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah, I really want the LeonxCloud lemon, but I really don't want them to break up and have Cloud go back to Seph. ;; Leon and Cloud are so great together! Please don't break them up. ;;

Great chapter! It really kept me on my toes! Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad Axel. Shame on you for being an asshole. *kicks him* Great job! Keep it up, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
person aragorn821
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dunno about Axel, but I wanna see more of Roxas... maybe both! Great story. :)
person Spaz
schedule May 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man I dont know??? gaaa... I love Cloud and Seph. But at the same time I dont want to see Leon hurt. grrr. *thinking* ah screw it. Cloud and Seph. there I did it. :) great job. I have to read more now. thank you for this.

Spaz
person Unknown
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Got one, no two things to say:

Great story! Love it!

And riku and sora or the kitchen thingy! X)