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for Melinda's pet

by Kundrat1280

person Rick
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful story. You made something incredible and you should be very proud.
person Hope Darkeheart
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story...just...awesome.
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story. the ending was great. Sad, but great. When is Melinda going to take a new pet? ;)
person Raizari
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The ending was sad :( I had to take a few moments after to cry a little. Even if it was just a story, just got to me. Thanks for the privilige to read this. :D
person Choppasama
schedule May 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazing.....your writing style is beautiful. And I've read my fair share of everything!
You were able to capture every emotion, and brought life into your characters, which is no small feat.
Honestly, you made me SO SAD (I cried....which doesn't happen a lot) with this story, yet so very happy at the same time. It felt like i was experiencing the events and growing old myself.
Please continue your writing for years to come, and thank ou for your time well spent.
person Azure
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such a beautiful story, but the ending was just so sad, a shame that they could not be together forever.
person flynalien
schedule April 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a DARN GOOD story! I was crying at the end! lol Loved it and thoroughly enjoyed it!
person Timmo
schedule April 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was such a beautiful ending!

I cried :(

Thanks for writing such an amazing and gripping story, I loved every single page to it.

Hope to see more of your work in the future!
person Timmo
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love It i Love It i Love It!!!

You're a absolute god at writing stories like these! I feel like a youngin waiting eagerly to open up presents at christmas. I check this site regulary in hope that there Is a fun packed new chapter to this story!

Please continue I beg you!

PS. Would it be too much to ask to get a nice happy ending at the end of this story? I feel horu and melinda deserve something happy.

Once again, work of art!

-Tim