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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Made me cry and feel better at the same time. I had been having a horrid day until this. Thanks. One of those few stories I can reread and just enjoy.
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oo last passage is rather depressing. skillfully written though, and its not common that you get to see the end of the mayfly romance(romance between an immmortal and da mortal).
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful storry, it is so ful of pation, love and raw emotions! I was fully captivated by it and red it all in a single breath.
What had captivated me the most is the ending however. As much as i hate sad endings, I have to give it to you it was beautifuly put. I cried myself along with Melinda at Horu's death as if I lost someone dear to me. I still have tears in my eyes.
It was a brave desision on your part to end it this way instead of cutting it of on the usual "they lived happily ever after". And it is a truthful and inevitable ending for all such unusual romances involving one mortal and one immortal or rather long-lived being. Cudos on making this desision in your story. Hopefully one day they WILL meet again, to be together forever at last. :)
What had captivated me the most is the ending however. As much as i hate sad endings, I have to give it to you it was beautifuly put. I cried myself along with Melinda at Horu's death as if I lost someone dear to me. I still have tears in my eyes.
It was a brave desision on your part to end it this way instead of cutting it of on the usual "they lived happily ever after". And it is a truthful and inevitable ending for all such unusual romances involving one mortal and one immortal or rather long-lived being. Cudos on making this desision in your story. Hopefully one day they WILL meet again, to be together forever at last. :)
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww the story is so sad, plz update im curious to know if she finally gets to be with horu again.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Phenomenal story, truly. It wasn't just about the sex, although those parts were well and mostly tastefully written. The bond between Horu and Melinda was profound. Over the course of the story, I really became attached to the two characters. In fact, I nearly cried when Horu died. Great job integrating story line from the game, as well as lore and jobs. I loved it, keep up the good work.
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You damn motherfucker! The end made me cry!
But serious now. I think this story is good, BUT you really should show the relationship development between Horu and Melinda and how Melinda developed such a dominating, possesive disoder. You should rewrite this and expand it.
The ending ruled btw. XD
What server do you play on?
But serious now. I think this story is good, BUT you really should show the relationship development between Horu and Melinda and how Melinda developed such a dominating, possesive disoder. You should rewrite this and expand it.
The ending ruled btw. XD
What server do you play on?
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was seriously one of the most wonderfull stories i have read in a verry long time, it was incredibly touching and i absolutely loved it, your writeing is fanominal and i probably spelled that word wrong but i dont care just absolutely mind blowing i LOVE your story
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Return of Rodrick for one sentence!
Excelent story! Also, for one who hates slave things, i loved it. That's all i can say! You are the master of disaster!
Excelent story! Also, for one who hates slave things, i loved it. That's all i can say! You are the master of disaster!
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit sad ending :(
I really enjoyed this story...it was well written and of couse, hot as hell. For some reason, I am really entrigued by the shaman character that showed up for a short while. Whatever happened to him? Regardless, great ending to a great story.
I really enjoyed this story...it was well written and of couse, hot as hell. For some reason, I am really entrigued by the shaman character that showed up for a short while. Whatever happened to him? Regardless, great ending to a great story.
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is easily one of the best fics for WoW i've had the pleasure of reading! Its beatiful how they warm up to each other and they both take care of each other, the last chapter was very sad but the ending was extremely heart warming. Its a shame that Horu got old but I like how you incorporate his mother into it so thats a good piece of closure :) Congrats on a great fic!