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for Simple Sisters

by AnnAnime

person Mother
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a ganon romance? hm, I thought it wasn't going to be...but I like it the same. kthx.
person AnnAnime
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~~To Mother~~ Does that mean you don't like the story or that you do or are just messing with me? Anyways I also wanted to let everyone know that I'll add more onto it tonight while I was at it.
person Mother
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No, please add more...I was just messing with you, but really i like it
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's alright. I'm a bit of a critic, sorry, but just put a little more time into your chapters and descriptions of things. It all seems kinda...well, vague. Hope you don't take offense to that, I'm just a bit blunt. You get 3 stars. Good work, just improve a bit.
person Alexis
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE THIS IS SOOOO GOOD AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!
person Mother
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ann, this is your mother speaking.

YOU ARE GROUNDED FOR A MONTH!
person Anon
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finish it!