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Ah so is Fayt really going to take care of Albel?...I can see it now Albel not letting anyone near him or Fayt that would be cute to see. or something else might happen since you turn Albel into a child this is going to be funny to see. now I almost fell bad fore Fayt he might not get any sleep. but yes I can see them sleeping in the same bed would be nice. but not unless Fayt's Mother come by and vist him or Sophia's Parents that would be more funny but it's up to you so good luck with this one.

so~ cute >wyeah i´m weird but that´s the way it is... the writting is good, it is really detailed
continue as soon as possible...
i would like to see.. Cliff or Fayt raping little Albel XD
yup! im a crazy girl XD.. but i would really like seeing somethin like that...
SO PLEASE continue n_n

it´s cool if you can put some shota it would be perfect.. if you don´t know what shota means i´ll explain it to you it´s a big men/youth having sex with a little boy.... i love this stuff and your story it is perfect to apply that genre of yaoi x3~ ... and.. tha way you writte is good, you just need to make that chapters longer... please continue and try to put some shota please... i´ll wait fot he next chapter

Aww... cute Albel. *Stab by Albel* More please, I wanna read more.

I like it. It sounds like its going to be very interesting. Can't wait to see what will happen next.