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-sigh- i still love this fic. i cant get over how great it is. update soon plz

This chapter seemed so sad. Abel has some really depressing thoughts some times doesnt he? Even in the game, at some moments he even suiduical (sp?). I love how you made Fayt care for Abel and had him worry about Abel form almost the whole time they been together. It was still a awesome chapter!

wow! that was a great fic. its a whole lot better than mine is. to me any way. plz update soon.

I love your Story! Sentimental Feelings, t'is the best faytxalbel story ever, and i only read those ones XD cant wait for the next chapter :D

I love your story!!! And I like everything
in this chapter just like the other chapters.
Poor Fayt, Albel is still a child XD
Hope you will update soon! Can't wait for
the next chapter. Good luck with this story
and others if you are writhing them.

Love the pair AlbelxFayt
They are so sweet together :3

-Erim-

HA! I got the funniest mental image of a chibi Albel trying to fight a gigantic monster! Especially since the chibi Albel was using the grown Albel's lines from the game, but they sounded...amusing...in a three year old's voice. Hehehe.

~Lee

I have to say that by far, this is the best Star Ocean fanfic that I have ever read, and it is close to beating out all the other genres as well. I am greatly impressed with the way you keep both Fayt and Albel in character and with your imagination. I enjoyed this chapter very much, even if it did not go the way you had wanted. You portray both Albel's pride and need to fight as well as Fayt's fear and concern over him. Normally I don't do this, but this fic has inspired me to want to make you a little gift in thanks for sharing this wonderful story with myself and the many people who read it. I look forward to the next chapter very much! Expect to see a little gift for you in my next review ^^ btw Phantom was an excelent choice ^~

I'll tell you again, I love this story sooo much!! Abel was soo adorable in the chapter! He was soo excited to finally fight or atleast try to! Fayt is so protective of Abel that I just wanna squeal! They are soo cute together. I also like how you had Maria put the group in seperate little labels, but how she can't quite put a label on them.

Impressive. You mentioned before that your sentence structure is wierd and it is, but when I read them it sounds kind of like unrhymed poetry. I like how you let Albel keep his own mind but still have to battle with the "inner child". It looks to me like everybody is IC except for Fayt sometimes. Every once in awhile he seems more... motherly than I invision him. I loved the scene in the third chapter with Fayt standing in front of the window, I wish I knew someone who could draw that, it would make an amazing picture.I can't wait to see what happens when Albel gets his adult body back. Please keep writing, but take the time need to keep the story as good as it has been.

*Smacks head* I was following the fic way back when I didn't even have an account yet! But then I forgot the title or something and couldn't find it...But I found it again! Yay! *Ahem* Sorry about that. I LOVE THIS STORY! Albel makes me laugh so much...and Fayt is so in character! Kudos to you!