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The awesomeness of this fic exceeded all and every expectation I had when I clicked the link. It is wonderfully in depth (a very good thing except when it comes to Sophia, bleh), a rich and descriptive blend that boggles the mind. Eagerly awaiting your next update.

I love this fic. Despite many grammatical errors (which is understandable for a non English-first-language speaker), it's still got a mezmerizing style to it that does make it enjoyable to read. I really adore the plot, as farfetched as it may be... and most of the characters are still in-character (or as in-character as they would probably be, considering the circumstances and situations they're thrown into). Plus, it's interesting to consider the philosophical reasoning, and you do have a way of making the reader really think about the theories you propose. All I can say is that I eagerly await the next update.

OMG!? O_O I won somethin!? -dies from shock- Arigato, Ciissi-Sama! ^^ No need to rush on it or anything, just being able to read your story is all the reward I need. I feel that this chapter has added a great deal of depth to the other characters, ones that aren't really mentioned very much aside from the basics. Sophia's thoughts and the way she resolves her inner turmoil over Fayt and Albel has transformed her from the annoying fangirl that most stories portray her as(Mine included), into a stronger, more human character that I actually can feel myself relating to on some level. Her thoughts and emotions open her up for us to see beyond the naiveite that she is surrounded with and makes her a likeble character. For that feat I applaude you. Also, Roger is just downright adorable. I have never seen this particular angle taken with his character and it works quite nicely, especially playing off of his "Real Man" obsession. It makes me want to hug him. ^^ Adray creeped me out in the begining of the story, mainly because he sounded almost pehdifile-ish. But, now that I've seen more of his point of view, I find myself enjoying how you've portrayed him even more ( Even though pehdifile Adray cracks me up too...>>). The little scenes with Fayt and Albel are absolutely adorable, especially the one that Sophia witnessed. The funny thing is, the character I feel the worst for is Cliff. Why? WHo know, perhaps my own experiances in life play some role in my opinion. Overall, I think that this chapter was needed and has added so much to the interworkings of the plot. Also, you officially Kick Ass, mainly because you like Within Temptation. ^^ -cheers- Hurray! I look forward to your next update!!

whoope! i got my freind reading it. she loves it as much as i do. well, i can't wait for the updates. have fun this summer. i look forward to the next chapter. ^_^

Sorry that i wasnt able to review the other 2 chapters. I couldnt get into the website anymore till now. Abel is becoming quite the little pervert isnt he? lol It's soo cute! I can't wait for the next one!

i love this, its pure fluff every ones in charcter and your style of writing its clean,neet and descripive.yeahokay my reveiw sucks....please, giveith thee fan girls more fluff!!!!!!

Aww! This is such an adorable chapter! That it the only word I can come up with for it. Heh, situations like these kinda makes me want to smack those boys on the back of the head, mainly because it's so obvious that the care, maybe even love one another and yet they refuse to admit it. Ah, good old drama, got to love it. I await your next update eagerly Cissii-Sama!

Poor, poor, little Fayt. I agree with your other reviewer that for Albel to turn back into his true form would be quite wonderful, but chibi Albel is just so adorable! I understand how you feel about the whole disliking everything you write. I do the same thing. (In fact that is why Fayted hasn't been updated-cough-) I am sure that whatever you feel is wrong with the story will be resolved eventually, Ciissi-Sama. And as for the change in it, stories tend to morph as you write, mainly because ideas and opinions change, and also because it wasn't all written in the same instant. But, I still enjoy this story very much and await your next update! Oh! And I have a little present for you. ^^ I fell in love with the scene from chapter one when Albel yells Maggots from Fayt's shoulder and so I couldn't help myself.
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That was, wonderful. I was wondering how the bath scene would work out with these two, that was by far teh best way to handle it. Poor Fayt, good thing Albel was looking the otehr way XP But on the other hand, poor Albel, he doesn't realize just how much he got accomplished today. In a away, I wish Albel would get his body back soon, but at the same time, their reactions to each otehr like this are too sweet for it to end.

And don't worry about the lazy part, when this place went down, I became very lazy with my own writing too...

This has to be your best chapter yet. I am absolutely in love with this paragraph:
"For a moment the amazed on-lookers saw a black image of tall, slender man carrying the evil-looking katana in the light that the celestial being was giving off. The black, long-haired man stepped closer to the celestial male and it seemed for a moment that he wound his arms around the holy person and kissed him deeply, like trying to savor the other one and drown the holy one into his darkness and evilness."

Actually, that whole section concerning Fayt's destroyer power is wonderful. I like how you have seperated the paragraphs and thoughts with Fayt's calling of Albel's name. The imagery and diction is well done and the style in which you have written it is perfect for the Angel/Demon theme. It's a wonderful theme and I agree with you, it suits them quite well. I'm impressed! ^^ I look forward to your next update!