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June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you haven't abandonned this story! If you're still working on it, I would be happy to beta. And I'm sorry I'm only now getting back to you (so she says, 9 months later)
I really love this story, so I hope you'll continue! Please email me at flash_roses@sbcglobal.net!
I really love this story, so I hope you'll continue! Please email me at flash_roses@sbcglobal.net!
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm hoping to see more from this story. I've been following it since chapter two, though I'm not a big reviewer... please keep going.
Hey, maybe I could bribe you with a fanart? lol
My Deviantart.com account is Yami-no-Matsuei. I hope you check it out when its finished. :)
Hey, maybe I could bribe you with a fanart? lol
My Deviantart.com account is Yami-no-Matsuei. I hope you check it out when its finished. :)
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its been a very long time since you have updated.. Will there be one eventually? I love this story so much.. it seems a waste to let it just fade away like this.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay this paragrah,...
Somehow it had become gradually harder and harder for Albel to stay away from the Leingod boy. He did not know the reason why. He only knew that he needed, yearned that presence, feeling, touch, *thrill* that only the blue-haired young man was able to give him. It did not matter if they were not able to train, to do some swordplay. He could not understand what was going on inside him. He did not feel sick or anything, but all this illogicality was making him wonder if he had somehow regained his soul...
the word 'cute' can't even describe how sweet, innocent and adorible that was. but yes the whole chapter another nice job well done i can't wait for the next one. school is an evil thing ya know.
and you liked my picture? really!!! my heart explodes with joy! thank you thank you thank you! <3
Somehow it had become gradually harder and harder for Albel to stay away from the Leingod boy. He did not know the reason why. He only knew that he needed, yearned that presence, feeling, touch, *thrill* that only the blue-haired young man was able to give him. It did not matter if they were not able to train, to do some swordplay. He could not understand what was going on inside him. He did not feel sick or anything, but all this illogicality was making him wonder if he had somehow regained his soul...
the word 'cute' can't even describe how sweet, innocent and adorible that was. but yes the whole chapter another nice job well done i can't wait for the next one. school is an evil thing ya know.
and you liked my picture? really!!! my heart explodes with joy! thank you thank you thank you! <3
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter really struk me. I've been following your story for some time, and your analysis of the difference between the conceps of friendship and beloved really made me think. What you said is true of course, but the philosophical truth behind it all seems to be just beyond too many people's grasp. It's a pity really. I guess your chapter gave me a sort of bittersweet nostalgia, having dealt with close-minded individuals at thier worst while being able to see the sunrise over the horizon, just out of reach, if you know what i mean. I guess what i'm saying is that your concepts are wonderful and the story is beautiful. When i started reading your fic a year or so ago i thought it would be a comical fic, but it is truly a thing of beauty. Please continue. I look foreward to your next chapter.
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter. Especially how you made Abel and Fayt feel and think. To tell you the truth my eyes got a watery. ^~^
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is really fantastic, but you haven't updated in so long! I wonder, have you abandonned it? I hope not. As for a good yaoi horror fic, one of the best I've ever read is 'Lose Yourself' on ff.net. It's SoRiku with some vague Sora/Kairi, and my God it is just about the BEST horror story I've ever read! Seriously, check it out.
I really liked evil!dream!Fayt in this chapter. Yes, I've noticed some grammar and spelling errors here and there. If you need a beta, perhaps I could help? The plot progression in this fic is very nice, even though I've been waiting for them to 'hook up', things are developing so smoothly that even in the slowest of chapters I'm kept on the edge of my seat. Sometimes Fayt seems...not out of character, but different from how I interpret him. But he can be interpreted in lots of different ways, and your way is certainly more close to mine than many other authors'.
Please continue this!
I'm a native English speaker, and I've found it hard to adjust to the looser grammar structure of Japanese. However, I've found the nearly nonexistant structure of Japanese to be much easier than the highly structured French. Even though I'm nearly fluent in French, I often know the words and how they should go together, but using the French grammar, I just can't put them into a sentence. I often have to break it down into several smaller sentences so that it remains understandable. In that sense I think English has a bit of an edvantage, because if you get your words out of order, it is still more understandable than it would be in French. And of course we don't have gender-specific nouns!
Japanese is of course the easiest once you learn the particles! You can move the words around all you want so long as the verb is at the end! I think the biggest challenge in any language is the grammar. Vocabulary is just a matter of memorizing and buying a good dictionary, but grammar is just hours and hours of reading and writing and listening until it all starts coming together in your head.
~Ja ne.
I really liked evil!dream!Fayt in this chapter. Yes, I've noticed some grammar and spelling errors here and there. If you need a beta, perhaps I could help? The plot progression in this fic is very nice, even though I've been waiting for them to 'hook up', things are developing so smoothly that even in the slowest of chapters I'm kept on the edge of my seat. Sometimes Fayt seems...not out of character, but different from how I interpret him. But he can be interpreted in lots of different ways, and your way is certainly more close to mine than many other authors'.
Please continue this!
I'm a native English speaker, and I've found it hard to adjust to the looser grammar structure of Japanese. However, I've found the nearly nonexistant structure of Japanese to be much easier than the highly structured French. Even though I'm nearly fluent in French, I often know the words and how they should go together, but using the French grammar, I just can't put them into a sentence. I often have to break it down into several smaller sentences so that it remains understandable. In that sense I think English has a bit of an edvantage, because if you get your words out of order, it is still more understandable than it would be in French. And of course we don't have gender-specific nouns!
Japanese is of course the easiest once you learn the particles! You can move the words around all you want so long as the verb is at the end! I think the biggest challenge in any language is the grammar. Vocabulary is just a matter of memorizing and buying a good dictionary, but grammar is just hours and hours of reading and writing and listening until it all starts coming together in your head.
~Ja ne.
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i made this. its a gift for ya. its about the story
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/39148915/
i cant draw very well but. i hope you enjoy it. keep up the good work! whooooooot!
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/39148915/
i cant draw very well but. i hope you enjoy it. keep up the good work! whooooooot!
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww this was the best chapter yet.i dont think i'ev ever read a fanficton where its gone so in depth into albel the wicked nox the way he thinks or his dreams. never so graphic and descripive at that. that was so awsome... I JUST LOVE THIS STORY! and what do you mean you mean not continue it its awsome. and no its not geting werid at all by any means! ^_^
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the part where Fayt just wants to touch and play with Abel's hair. I wonder how long Abel would let him? lol That was one weird dream... I actually lost myself in it and had to reread it several times. I adore your writing style!! It makes me want to read the whole thing again and again (which I already did XD).